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Aug 26, 2008 4:20 PM #234897
I'm not happy with neither of them.

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Aug 26, 2008 4:31 PM #234903
Your shading is great.
However, the first one..the face could be fixed.
Really don't have much to say.. But it's fine.
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Aug 26, 2008 4:35 PM #234904
You should be proud. Murdoc has a really evil spirit there. But while drawing Gorillaz characters you should concern the style, like the gradient type colouring and the pointy faces.

The Spiderman one has a great anatomy and shading but a bit empty on the background, you should add more stuff.
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Aug 26, 2008 9:10 PM #235106
Thanks for the comments. What should I improve on Spidey's face?

And Murdoc isn't that spiky to begin with, imo.

Piggy's hawt collab:
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Aug 26, 2008 9:43 PM #235131
Dude. Spida Man looks pretty epic.
Murdoc be pimpin'.

I like the shading most, and the dullness of the colors.


And thats one hawt collab.
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Aug 26, 2008 11:20 PM #235246
Dude, your sick...
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Aug 26, 2008 11:22 PM #235253
The spider man one:
His right shoulder is massive, either his arm should be bigger, or the shoulder should be smaller.
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Aug 26, 2008 11:26 PM #235261
Quote from Sunder Forge
The spider man one:
His right shoulder is massive, either his arm should be bigger, or the shoulder should be smaller.


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Aug 26, 2008 11:30 PM #235272
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Oh ****, I matched my left to his right.
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Aug 26, 2008 11:41 PM #235290
In spidey's head, his eyes seem to be differentiate from the position and light on it.
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Aug 27, 2008 12:11 AM #235337
1st one: ew

2nd one: needs some polishing

3rd one: wtf?
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Aug 27, 2008 12:56 AM #235373
Quote from Bpanther13
1st one: ew

2nd one: needs some polishing

3rd one: wtf?


are you serious? one of us probably doesn't know what we are talking about because i loved the first one.
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Aug 27, 2008 12:58 AM #235375
And the third one is pure genius.
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Aug 27, 2008 1:14 PM #235737
Quote from Bpanther13
1st one: ew

2nd one: needs some polishing

3rd one: wtf?

How about telling me what's wrong and how to improve instead of weird expressions I don't understand before I delete your post. Don't you know how to give constructive criticism?

The third one was decided on the basis of the sentence piggy gave me. And check out the hawt collab kay.
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Aug 27, 2008 1:28 PM #235745
Last one was pretty shweeet, but the other too have this weird "off" feeling, like something is wrong put you can't describe it. The first one his head seems a bit weird, the second one his face maybe.
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