This is just a test of my new upcomming animation THE FACILITY,this is just a small part of it please comment whether its stupid,crap,or just alright or even just put in some advice would do thnks:Spiderman:

lol no one is replying sniff.

awsome anim, (urgh, think i feel tired, thats why i cant comment well)
nice beam circle thing, and the camera thing was good aswell, but....hate the blood, sorry, nice idea though
Rabstar

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awsome anim, (urgh, think i feel tired, thats why i cant comment well)
nice beam circle thing, and the camera thing was good aswell, but....hate the blood, sorry, nice idea though
Rabstar

lool.it ok i understand many people dnt like gore XD
but thnks for commeting anyway :D
(naw seriously ty)
but i do like gore(not to gory more of zombie gore and STICK GORE(killing spree..))<--wtf a "()" in a "(())" !??!

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awsome anim, (urgh, think i feel tired, thats why i cant comment well)
nice beam circle thing, and the camera thing was good aswell, but....hate the blood, sorry, nice idea though
Rabstar

ow yea i forgot,BOO YAA! :Happy:

Don't double post please, there is an "Editting button". >.<
I think Rabstar meant that your blood wasn't so well made, not that he hates gore. :P
Your main problem is smoothness.
How do you do that?
It's easy, just add more frames in between frames.
So it's like making 20 frames or so for a single movement.. etc. etc.
I'm waiting for the copy paste.
xD

Oh, you mean this one;

Well, if you compare your animation to the animations of people who're on this for a while now, you'll see that yours... can't keep up with those, but that's normal, you can't be born a master.
There are some keywords you'll hear all the time. One of them is smoothness. It means that the movements are smooth and look very realistic, without being choppy and looking totally unreal. To do this, you need to make a movement many frames long. You need to animate the frames between a foot on the ground and a foot in a face instead of both those two. To give you a hint, I used to make my kicks about 6-9 frames long when I still animated.
Yes this takes time, but there's no need to rush your animations. If you're fed up for a moment, save the animation and continue somewhen else. That's just normal, everybody works that way.
Then, there's the stiffness. See, what you do is just move the limb that's used for the thing, like a leg for a kick or an arm for a punch. But that's not good, you should look at yourself in front of a mirror, punching. The movement of your arm affects other parts of your body, they move, too. Try to get this into an animation.
Then, easing is hard to explain. What you do is animate a movement and then just stop. It's like this:

|--|--|--|--|--|--|--|--|--|

But that's unrealistic. When animating, make the movements start slowly, then get faster and then calm down again, like this:

|-|--|---|----|---|--|-||


It's a bit hard to explain but I hope you get it.

Now, for you're not very good at animating, post your animations in this thread: http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330

It's a thread for Beginners to post their animations. If you post them here on the forum, you'll probably get flamed for that because we don't want a load of beginner's posting it here.

YOU MAY WANT TO speed it up a bit more [/Sarcasm]

Something in that reminded me of this
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3002/beamduelsp8.gif


But erm, beginners section?

That was nice and you used midget stks from the naruto pack in droidz..
very interesting and it was really cool..

Don't use effects until you got a good understanding of the basics. Basics meaning easing, smoothness, movements, and stiffness.