Raizen Animation



http://www.stickpage.com/raizenplay.shtml

By: JAVARUSH214

Well deserved .
Great Job

Awesome .

In before bin.
J/k j/k.
Pretty nice, I guess, just really weird storyline and ****ed up text show up.

It was nice, Im glad you made such a long animation but I felt that the heads were very strange (with the tentacles) because even when theyd been KOd or killed the tentacles were still moving...
You can solve it by breaking the mc apart when the person is dead.
Apart from that it was nice for sure.

Javarush... you're on front page !!! Hahaha Raizen is really cool. It has the potential of a great series, but as mentioned before it needs more explanation of who Raizen is and why everything is happening since you actually tried to add more detail. Story details come with visual details ^_^. You should make an explanatory episode when you have time. That episode should be like a... story in images (have you seen Castle Prologue?) just to explain the fans what the story is all about. :) I really liked Raizen, can't wait for 2nd episode.

Hey, you finally made front page!

Good job. Movements could have been more fluid, and the text could be fixed up, but it's pretty cool. You've improved a lot since I last saw you.

Good work buddy.

Quote from Mesmay

It was nice, Im glad you made such a long animation but I felt that the heads were very strange (with the tentacles) because even when theyd been KOd or killed the tentacles were still moving...
You can solve it by breaking the mc apart when the person is dead.
Apart from that it was nice for sure.

HOLY F**K your right man! damn.. i didnt think of that.. hahaha


thanks for the comments guys i appreciate it ^^

good job dude i enjoyed that...even though the storyline sorta seemed like it was brought in at the last second. (i dont hold it against you, i do that all the time :p).

Very nice Javarush (formally known as "Rebelion214"). I knew that you'd get front page some day XD

Really Nice :3 smooth and awesome!

It's shit.

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ggaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy

I enjoyed it. Don't know why people think it sucks.

It was very well done. A little stiff at some parts and sometimes forgot some movements but still very awesome.