Insane Mania

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Sep 2, 2008 10:13 PM #243012
Insanity is my new name, k?

http://byondrage.deviantart.com/art/Insane-Mania-96664144

i felt like posting. Insanity is my new name, k?
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Sep 2, 2008 10:17 PM #243017
Name sucks.
Animation was boring.
Don't try to get out of doing particles, it looked like you were lazy.
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Sep 2, 2008 10:24 PM #243027
the anim really pissed me off with the smoke damn, if you can't do dont attemt because it looks gay therefore makin the anim look gay.

the movements and the rest was nice tho.
other than the smoke, good job.
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Sep 2, 2008 10:27 PM #243032
Too much smoke effects. Not much variety in them. And I actually zoned out on the animations low points of action so it wasn't really grabbing my attention at times. Overall it was good for being made in five days. And I still like the byondrage name, why did you change it D:?
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Sep 2, 2008 10:40 PM #243043
It was alright but not your best.

I see what you were, trying to do (Bubble mania) type thing.
Work on your effects, but still good.

Overall Rating 6/10
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Sep 2, 2008 11:28 PM #243119
The only thing wrong is that the animation was boring. Try making it choreographed with the music, or better yet pick music that has high and low parts to create more dramatic and exciting parts in the animation.

And the smoke was pretty bad. Sorry.
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Sep 3, 2008 6:28 AM #243494
I agree with the rest on this, others found the animation very entertaining on other sites, but was wondering if I was the only one feeling a bit different. Don't get me wrong it still has nice movements, but the fights didn't last to long and were mostly broken up by the half assed smoke effects, that were really used like every 5 seconds of the movie.

Try to keep it more interesting next time, but for making this in only 5 days its really great. Keep it up <:
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Sep 3, 2008 11:36 AM #243610
i lold when it said toothbrush it should of been small though big was fine LOL
animation wasnt that boring for me but was at some times i just didnt feel too interested in watching it
the
smoke
effects
were
dumb or i could say bs but i would just say that cuz i like saying it
anwyay the smoke effects werent that good n it was mostly exactly the same I THINK
the weapons did turn me on LOL me likey =)
i actually wanted to see more but only if it was more interesting and more action involved
it was actually a really cool animation i thought nearly
8/10 from me
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Sep 3, 2008 11:45 AM #243615
What harsh critiques, i think it owned, out of all the collab posted on SPP, i was definetely the smoothest, even to be made in just 5 days is crazy, 9/10
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Sep 3, 2008 12:43 PM #243636
Like others, i liked everthing but the overused smoke.
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Sep 3, 2008 12:53 PM #243650
i didnt mind the smoke really...i actually thought it was pretty good apart from the fact you never actually finished it (as in, you see smoke start...but you dont see it disperse into particles and eventually disappear). but even so, i liked the anim. the one thing that annoyed me was that it was difficult to follow who's left and whos dead...which was made more difficult by people coming back to life XD

but to be honest. good anim IMO.
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Sep 3, 2008 1:07 PM #243653
I didn't mind the smoke either.

I still think it's awesome.
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Sep 3, 2008 1:43 PM #243664
yeah, the smoke was pretty decent for the most part except for the fact that there were a lot of random smoke clouds and then people dying.. Otherwise I liked it.

And he did it in 5 days ppl... FIVE DAISE
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Sep 3, 2008 1:47 PM #243665
This is the first good mania I have ever seen [aside from jcmania and bubblemania of course].
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Sep 3, 2008 9:11 PM #243865
Quote from Miccool
yeah, the smoke was pretty decent for the most part except for the fact that there were a lot of random smoke clouds and then people dying.. Otherwise I liked it.

And he did it in 5 days ppl... FIVE DAISE


Lol FIVE DAISE guys!!!

Quote from Raffeh
This is the first good mania I have ever seen [aside from jcmania and bubblemania of course].


yh JC mania and bubble mania owned too i forgot lol!