Some Lyrics I Wrote. Thoughts?

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Sep 4, 2008 3:09 AM #244068
Plastic Masks

It makes me happy
To know that water burns
With two boards against my back
Soon a smile turns

It makes me carefree
To know the veil will tear
Another man enters
And I won't have to share

And now I know I. . .

Gotta find a way
To get away
Away from you
Away to sin

It makes me anxious
To know the knights will come out
With a cross in their hands, soon you'll be dead
Just lying about

It makes me cheerful
To know that you're around
Now lets go outside and
See if you sink and drown

And now I know I. . .

Gotta find a way
To get away
Away from you
Away to sin



- I kinda like them, let me know what you think. Still writing the music for it. -
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Sep 9, 2008 1:23 AM #248391
Oh come on, 22 veiws and no replies?
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Sep 9, 2008 1:37 AM #248399
Didn't understand what it meant, something like going back to sin(devil worshiping??lol) anyways not terrible but not amazing.