[Scorpioxxx] Short

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Sep 6, 2008 11:30 PM #246673
Eh, been a while since I posted anything I'd done, usualy due to the lack to good C&C. Anyway, try to enjoy this, sorry about the lack of sounds/music. This may apear in Interality btw.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=612038

TR is pretty shit and slowed it down ALOT. Download it and play ir from your desktop/wherever if you want to see it at proper speed, or give me a link to a decent uploader.

EDIT: Added some arm movement and changed the flip a bit. Don't really like he arms that much though.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=341202
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Sep 7, 2008 12:05 AM #246698
the arms were to...in one place. and the backflip was weird. but otherwise nice
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Sep 7, 2008 12:20 AM #246709
Work on the movements, the jump during the forward flip weren't realistic, make him jump higher while the board is flipping.

The Backflip was pretty good but make him land with more force, a little more easing, maybe?
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Sep 7, 2008 2:46 AM #246788
It looks pretty good. Most parts were nice and smooth.
Yeah, the flip was kinda choppy. But you can fix that.

Good job.
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Sep 7, 2008 2:49 AM #246794
****ing stiff as hell.
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Sep 7, 2008 2:50 AM #246795
Not really .
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Sep 7, 2008 2:53 AM #246797
Quote from Omega
Not really .

He doesn't even bend whilst on the skateboard.
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Sep 7, 2008 3:16 AM #246818
Quote from Sunder Forge
He doesn't even bend whilst on the skateboard.
:/


Well yeah, but it doesn't look bad.

And unless you're doing insane stunts on a skateboard, your body isn't going to move all that much.
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Sep 7, 2008 10:14 AM #247011
Right. I'll try adding in arm movement and i'll have a look at the flip.
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Sep 7, 2008 1:35 PM #247123
Make him crouch a little in the begining to get speed then bring his arms up and stand up a little.
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Sep 7, 2008 1:46 PM #247134
I don't know why, but to me it looks the physics are a little weird. Everything seems to weight less than they would in reality.

It also looks weird when he goest fast, he gains speed for no reason. When watching it fbf I saw that he put his foot down and kicked to get some speed, but it's still weird.

If that makes any sense to you, good job.

Im sorry for the english.
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Sep 7, 2008 2:19 PM #247164
Quote from Strills
I don't know why, but to me it looks the physics are a little weird. Everything seems to weight less than they would in reality.

It also looks weird when he goest fast, he gains speed for no reason. When watching it fbf I saw that he put his foot down and kicked to get some speed, but it's still weird.

If that makes any sense to you, good job.

Im sorry for the english.


Yea, I've never managed to get mass right in my work. Your english ain't bad btw.
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Sep 7, 2008 2:59 PM #247180
the speed was unnatrual
and I love it
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Sep 8, 2008 2:14 PM #247996
stiff is all i can say, i think u should add more frames.