Guess who's Black? (P:\

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Sep 8, 2008 12:17 AM #247626
Yeh hi ppl, i'm back! YAY!!! not....
Oh well so i felt like coming here and making a small completely random animation...
Just wanted to see if i got better or worse..
After watching the .swf 10 times i couldn't decide so plz coment on what's good or bad.... Yeah...

Here's the link: http://fwup.net/view/6rn9vwikag

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Sep 8, 2008 1:14 AM #247676
very nice, no critique except for the arms disappearing...again....
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Sep 8, 2008 1:17 AM #247680
damn >.< lol thanks anyways
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Sep 8, 2008 1:18 AM #247682
the kick needs more anticipation, aswell as the punch, other than that it is all very good.
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Sep 8, 2008 1:22 AM #247690
no clue who you are, but not bad. a bit fast and the punch happened to fast
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Sep 8, 2008 1:29 AM #247701
Quote from lolipop
no clue who you are, but not bad. a bit fast and the punch happened to fast


you suck at C&C.
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Sep 8, 2008 2:21 AM #247736
Lol dude be nice...
and yeh i'm not very famouse here yet... I haven't really had time to become really famous...
and yeh i didn't put too much effort into it... just a test short anim... i liked the jump though =P...
and yeh (again) i need to work on punches and kicks =) thanks
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Sep 8, 2008 2:40 AM #247747
Too fast, the first kick isn't very noticable at all the punch was fast too, the stop had no easing, . Jump physics were alright, landing was good, but the air kick after wasn't noticable either.

over all it was pretty ok.
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Sep 8, 2008 5:26 AM #247837
GOD ! ! ! i love it ! ^_^
i don't know why... but some how..that's cool :D
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Sep 8, 2008 6:56 AM #247863
Guess who's black black black..
Black again gain gain
Demons black black black
Tell a friend friend frined

Pretty nice. The movements were good but, the kick wasn't good and the punch was too fast. I know I repeated that but, thats the mistake I can spot.
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Sep 8, 2008 7:52 AM #247868
lol at your signature ._.

That was nice. Although he looked very hasty, he ran very fast then suddenly kicked, stopped, then continued and lost his arms.

It looks pretty ok, but also try to not make him look at the ground (with his head) since itlooks like he is, idk looking towards the ground all the time while running, looks a bit weird =]
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Sep 8, 2008 12:40 PM #247963
Kick was Stiff
Rest was okay

Make something longer
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Sep 8, 2008 7:48 PM #248152
Heh ok thanks WeaT and also Saha's coments was funny =P yeh i like black... i was going to make my stickman red but that would be copying from terkoiz... and also red looks kinda not as evil... yeh...
Also yeh i know about the arms >.< sorry pplz i just loose them, dunno why... it's like resizing that happens without u knowing it untill u watch the flash...
Also there's 1 problem with malking things longer >.> i get bored with them too fast and it's very annoying that i can't make anything good...
Well in total thanks =P

Heheh and btw SSJBryando, isn't my sig sexy? >:]