The writers collab!

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Jan 31, 2008 11:22 PM #81019
Name:Sarah
Age:26
Sex:Female
Physical description:Tanned skin,blonde hair,pefectly white teeth,blue eyes,sniper rifle
Backstory:Grew up as a rich spoilt child in a manor house until one day when she got home there had been a robbery by the new york mafia themselves.Six years later she became an asassin still an asassin now but also inspired by her gang mates.
Chapter:Second to last
Gang:Hells guards
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Jan 31, 2008 11:27 PM #81020
Uh, I would let you join but you lack the grammatical skills to be able to write properly. Sorry about that.
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Feb 1, 2008 12:47 AM #81037
Darn it i feel embarrassed.:Oh No!:
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Feb 1, 2008 12:56 AM #81045
I would; but I have total writers block and have had it for a while
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Feb 9, 2008 6:41 AM #82630
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Darn it i feel embarrassed.:Oh No!:

No need to feel embarrassed, descriptions are harder to write sometimes. =)
Try re-writing it, it takes some time. Punctuations count.
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I would; but I have total writers block and have had it for a while


Mhmm, you would, but you won't, just as Devour said, Please post here only if you want to join, or if you have any questions.
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Feb 10, 2008 8:42 AM #82845
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This is an idea which has hopefully never been done before. The one and only writers collaboration. The point in this collab is for each member that joins to write a chapter of a story. What the story is, and is about will be supplied below.

-The story is called Gang War, and there will be two teams/gangs fighting each other.

-These teams have been fighting for years, and the battle is finally coming to a close.

-Each chapter will consist of one gang member's side of the battle. In each chapter, you will write your gang member describing the experience of the gang fight, but you don't have to fight in it. Hell, you can do almost anything, as long as its realistic, fair, and on topic.

-When you begin your part, write a little bit in the Authors Notes.

The story type will be first person.

-You MUST have full grammar and punctuation in your writing.

-Your gang member will only be allowed one weapon.

-You must provide your gang member a detailed backstory.

-When you join, put in the following information:
Name:
Age:
Sex:
Physical description:
Backstory:
Chapter:
Gang:

-When you finish an entry, send a copy of the writing to me for proofreading and editing so I can fix up any mistakes you make, then I will send it to the person doing the next chapter.

-Whoever starts chapter one will be granted the privilege of naming the second gang, and being the leader of it. They may write more then one chapter, and they will survive till the last chapter where I will end the story.

-Chapters must be AT LEAST six pages long.

Font: Arial Black

Size: 12

Program: Microsoft Word

-There must be an equal number of gang members for the story.

-I will be in this too, but not as the first chapter. I will be writing the introduction, the prologue, and the last chapter.

Invites:
Big Bang
Kagedanji
.Alexeh

-If anyone else has writing skills, I invite you to come.

Entries:
Gang one: Indian-ation
- Name: Jared "Hawk" Anderson
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Physical discription: Close shaved beard. Always wearing black shades and carries his pistol everywhere. Wears a black T-shirt and pants, and white professional running shoes.
Backstory: The leader of Indian-ation. Hawk was beaten as a kid, and put down by racists. After a lot of rebellion, Hawk created a group of people willing to kill anyone who ruined their life.
Chapter: Introductory, prologue, and last chapter.


Chapter: 3.
-Name: "Jaguar"
Age:17
Sex: Female
Physical description: A white Jaguar mask, long black hair, Jet black leather jacket that goes all the way to her knees and buckled by silver buttons to the waist. This "dark creature" has been known as the "Jaguar" for her extreme speed. With elite martial arts of a heavy metal double ended spear, she could easily slice an unlucky enemy in two.
Backstory: Her real name is Sylvia Pleth, she had grown up along with her beloved master who taught her everything. Until one day, a strong man approached them one day and knocked Sylvia unconscious, when she woke up again, her master was lying in a pool of blood. Desperate and ferious, she joins the Indian-ation to search for the killer.
Gang: Indian-ation
Chapter: 5
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Gang two: ????
-Name: Blake. AKA: Dollar
Age: 19
Sex: Male
Physical description: Very strong legs. Not as strong arms but still powerfull. Muscular (not steroids though.) 6foot 3. short blond hair. day old beard.
Backstory: Grew up with a drug dealer father that somehow got possesion of Blake when he was in court with his now dead mother. His dad beat him and made him tough when he grew up, so he shut out emotions and went to being in a gang. And in time he became the group leader.
Gang: Hells Guards
Chapter: 4

-Name: John Varcasa
Age: 37
Sex: Male
Physical description: 234lb, 6 feet/four inches tall, only one working eye(wears a eyepatch on the other), white/tannish skin, sort of long black(with a grayish tint) hair with a thin beard.
Backstory: He grew up alone, his parents died when he was six. Ever since then he fought for himself. He learned how to stand up for himself, to conquer his fears. Soon he joined a gang, defended his allies. He has been in many gang wars and fights. He holds memories of those fights with the scars and wounds of the past. But one war, he remembers with greater intense than any of the others...
Chapter: 2
-Name: Slippeh
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Physical description: 235lb, 5'7 inches tall, always carries a knife on his belt
He has a scar that goes from his right eye, down the the left side of his jaw. He has raven black hair
Backstory: Slippeh ran away from home at the age of twelve. He's not violent unless he needs to be. He learned the skills of a blade extremely fast, as he needed to use it multiple times. He joined a gang, as it felt home, and the people there he was used to.
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Unlimited spots.

This story will be available for all to read after it's done. I'll have it in my signiture untill I leave stickpage, which will probably be never.


Tis is where I join in. My person and I'll upload the Chapter to SaveFile.

Name: Jose T. Montero
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Physical description: Black Hair, Latino, Strong, Physical, Slim, Tall, and Evasive, Durability
Backstory: Jose was walking through the streets homeless at the age of 16. He was a Juvenile Delinquent. He was walking around L.A. with a Wooden bat around the 'Ghetto' where 2 of his friends/groupies were walking with him. They started chasing 2 people down the street and the people pulled out guns. The other kids ran but Jose stood. One man shot One kid and the other.. Well the other. Jose joined a new Gang that was named Syndicate. He was given an M4A1 with a Silencer and worked his way up to the sort of Jr. Godfather.
Chapter:7
Gang: Syndicate
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Feb 10, 2008 10:37 AM #82861
Good entry, but the backstories don't need actual actions in it. Just a discription. Also, theres only two gangs you can be in; Syndicate and Indian-ation.
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Feb 10, 2008 10:40 AM #82862
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Good entry, but the backstories don't need actual actions in it. Just a discription. Also, theres only two gangs you can be in; Syndicate and Indian-ation.


Oh Okay then, put me in Syndicate :D

BTW; Have you heard the MP3 yet?
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Feb 10, 2008 10:41 AM #82863
I'll add you once you fix up the backstory.
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Feb 10, 2008 10:44 AM #82864
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I'll add you once you fix up the backstory.


K, I'll work on it Right Away. I also have to Fix my Story now xD..
And does it have to be 6 pages? I have a Mac so I dont know the difference between 6 pages and 3 pages xD.. It's cuz i use pages. not windows

BTW, Is that good?
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Feb 10, 2008 10:49 AM #82865
Don't start your story just yet. You'll have to wait untill the parts reach chapter 7.
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Feb 10, 2008 10:51 AM #82866
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Don't start your story just yet. You'll have to wait untill the parts reach chapter 7.
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LOL! Okay.. Well I was working on my chapter for like 3 hrs xD.. O well, I'll make another story for School :D
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Feb 10, 2008 8:09 PM #82911
Have we started chapter one yet?
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Feb 10, 2008 8:35 PM #82916
I'm supposed to have quit, but I can't resist this oppertunity.

Name: Dench
Age: 27
Sex: Male
Physical description: Weirs a suit and shades, slick hair and distinctive features.
Backstory: Dench comes from the city, grew up in the urban district and knows buisness. He fell in with the wrong people and has learnt to discard basic human morales. He is a hard person to socialise with, and gets what he wants.
Chapter: 3
Gang: Indian Ation

Plz in!
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Feb 10, 2008 9:17 PM #82922
Your in, but be sure to have all of your spelling correct when you write. Also, you have to do a chapter that isn't taken.