John is in prision... he want escape... and he will gonna do it!

good but sky feiw is confusing and still MORE FRAMES i gave it a 3 good job

It sucked ass .

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It sucked ass .

Oh, don't be so mean.

It sucked ass, btw.






invisible

Use a smoother brush tool, thicker strokes, add more frames and up the frame rate. I don't encourage that Birdseye view unless you add more detail to the stickfigures.
The most important things to work on are smoothness, easing, and of course, the artwork itself.

Practice.

Every now and then, animations like yours brings a tear to my eye. In this world of corruption, pollution and war your animation shows what one man can do to escape the confines of our daily lives. I watched with awe as he let out a rebel yell and fought for victory. I shall begin at the beginning. The fluid and completely viewable shuriken throw and guard battle at the beginning was masterfully choreographed. And then, without warning but not to much shock, it changes to birds eye view. It was such a drastic change, it reminds me of the first person part in the Doom movie. Except this time, this was way more stunning. He even dealed with guards completely surrounded and I could feel the guards heart quicken when he turned invisible. The sound effects were epic and really gave a feeling of atmosphere, same as the blood. The blood was very thick a bright red. Were these guards genetic experiments? Who knows. Then, I watched as he burst out of the box. Those walls were so thin, I thought they were invisible. Invisible walls cannot be seen by rebels, leading that their was no way for outside rescue.

At the end I cried and clapped. I cannot wait for his next adventure. Do continue!

9,000/10

Stunning.

you're getting better. but you need to crawl before you can walk. start making basic movements and basic punches. start the birdseye view stuff once you get better. 5/10.

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but you need to crawl before you can walk.

You need to study the art of Literature before you can post C&C. Lol kidding.

Not really good, you need to work on the graphics and animation before making an epic movie. Epic Movie FTW!!1

Epicness is the key to getting your submission on SP. You don't have to be epic to post on the portal though.

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Every now and then, animations like yours brings a tear to my eye. In this world of corruption, pollution and war your animation shows what one man can do to escape the confines of our daily lives. I watched with awe as he let out a rebel yell and fought for victory. I shall begin at the beginning. The fluid and completely viewable shuriken throw and guard battle at the beginning was masterfully choreographed. And then, without warning but not to much shock, it changes to birds eye view. It was such a drastic change, it reminds me of the first person part in the Doom movie. Except this time, this was way more stunning. He even dealed with guards completely surrounded and I could feel the guards heart quicken when he turned invisible. The sound effects were epic and really gave a feeling of atmosphere, same as the blood. The blood was very thick a bright red. Were these guards genetic experiments? Who knows. Then, I watched as he burst out of the box. Those walls were so thin, I thought they were invisible. Invisible walls cannot be seen by rebels, leading that their was no way for outside rescue.

At the end I cried and clapped. I cannot wait for his next adventure. Do continue!

9,000/10

Stunning.

Why do you try so much?

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Why do you try so much?

I have no idea. he just needs to stop reading poetry for a while.

I need to express how great that was.

And point out all it's ****ing faults

you messed up with the invisible text. Invisible text is [COLOR=][/color] but after the = type e5e5e5

then it looks like this.

Thank you guys! that's mine second video... i does'nt belive that you'll gonna comment it!

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I need to express how great that was.

And point out all it's ****ing faults

SUCKING BASTARD!

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Oh, don't be so mean.

Har har

You suck ass like him, too. As of now. When I posted.