Well, here goes my first...!

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Backflipz

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Sep 22, 2008 2:47 PM #259266
i dont think your effects, such as the dust/wind behind the running guy in speed hurts, was very good. the sticks were drawn like you just started (omg i wonder why) but it looks like you might be improving. you should still stick with very basic stuff, trust me im still in the basic practice part of flash.

btw, you prolly shouldnt be bumping so much. you'll piss off the scary ppl who like to yell at newbies.
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Sep 22, 2008 2:58 PM #259271
Quote from Canvas
u r awsum dud!
thech meh!


Quote from Mynx
OMFG that was awesome, like the best animation ever. I can't believe it, do you have like msn or stuff like that!?


Omg,are you proud of yourself ?

To your animations,yes,you have to practice,but you are getting better and better :)
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Sep 22, 2008 3:03 PM #259273
Thanks guys, i apreciate your advices.
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Sep 22, 2008 3:59 PM #259310
You guys are dicks, and are totally not funny.

It was nice for a first, I suggest you take a little more frames for the particles. Also like most said, check some tuts, but you are doing good.
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Sep 22, 2008 9:24 PM #259470
I've made another one: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=127822 (if anyone's intrested, that guy says: ZOMG PWNZORZ MOVE!)
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Sep 23, 2008 8:37 PM #260209
Its quite good,but try to focus on animation as an animation,I think you should slow it down a bit and work on basic movements,just my opinion :)

But these particles/effects were good.
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Sep 23, 2008 9:54 PM #260243
I made Xplozion Test, yay! http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=403063
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Sep 26, 2008 12:37 PM #262230
Please dudes! Comment!
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Sep 26, 2008 12:38 PM #262232
Nice bump.

Make the particles from the explosion last longer.
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Sep 26, 2008 8:18 PM #262383
zomg you are better than me now
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Sep 27, 2008 9:11 AM #262849
Hey, Thanks, but don't worry, practice makes perfect! ^.^
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Oct 11, 2008 7:06 PM #271083
Sorry for the ultimate bumpeh addiction, but i made new anim. Random
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Oct 11, 2008 8:42 PM #271135
Why dont you just make a new thread like everyone else does. =/