KSBG: Round 1
Started by: Motencu | Replies: 254 | Views: 10,769
Oct 20, 2008 9:48 PM #276829
Grubber, please rank them.
Oct 20, 2008 9:52 PM #276832
Quote from MotencuGrubber, please rank them.
I just finished .
Oct 20, 2008 9:53 PM #276833

****ing hypocrite
edit: lol the image blends in
Oct 20, 2008 10:02 PM #276842
Sunder Forge:
ETCH V.S CHUNK
ETCH:
First time I've seen an actual alive background, so that was a good change.
The character intro was interesting, cool loking text...but the sticks weren't very interesting looking at that point.
The fighting was nice, the bouncing was great actually. When they started fighting, it was just a beatdown, the green guy was going crazy on the purple guy, and unleashed some pretty cool moves, then he ran up a wall that never existed, pulled out a gun that looked like a bent over pipe, and made the purple guy spill blood that didn't have many qualities of blood, (one peice stayed on the purple guys head, when he was on the ground, and looked pretty ****ed up) it looks like you got lazy. DO NOT GET LAZY, the gun could of has way more detail, how you had it was just a 3 second job, which isn't enough to pass for a gun. The blood looked like paper, it didn't spray, it didn't move like water, it moved like paper, at least make it get smaller or something.
6.5/10
CHUNK:
What am I supposed to say?
backgrounds, designs, texts, everything but the movements was terrible, there was easing, and fluid movements, I'll give you that, and the final part was funny as ****.... but seriously, a joke can't carve a door, no matter how much machinery it gets.
3/10
DEMI ANGEL V.S U-T
DEMI ANGEL:
Backgrounds were nice, movements were nice, easing was nice.
Fire didn't look like fire, fire is not dark yellow with lighter yellow inside it, it moves a bit like fire, but fire waves back and fourth. Particles were nice, when the fire was tossed at the screen, it looked like it was going under the screen, which I don't think was your goal. :/
The close up faces at the end..... were very unappealing, I don't recall anything causing the grey stick the bleed from the eyes or mouth, sure he was hit by fire, but that should burn him, not..... whatever it appeard to do, the other guy just looked weird, could be your style, can't really say.
7/10
U-T
Who was who? The black guy shrank so muc it looked unreal, I couldn't even tell the blue guys are was cut, it was so crowded. The blood, it seems like it teleported, too ****ign fast. The Background was nice, foreground was terrible, didn't even looke like it's even part of that movie. Waslking was good, not great. The sword fell behind the Bg, like the blue guy, which seemed completely carless, and the sword also looked rushed, no sahde, different colors or anything.
How did the black guy even cut the blue guy?
4.5/10
ETCH V.S CHUNK
ETCH:
First time I've seen an actual alive background, so that was a good change.
The character intro was interesting, cool loking text...but the sticks weren't very interesting looking at that point.
The fighting was nice, the bouncing was great actually. When they started fighting, it was just a beatdown, the green guy was going crazy on the purple guy, and unleashed some pretty cool moves, then he ran up a wall that never existed, pulled out a gun that looked like a bent over pipe, and made the purple guy spill blood that didn't have many qualities of blood, (one peice stayed on the purple guys head, when he was on the ground, and looked pretty ****ed up) it looks like you got lazy. DO NOT GET LAZY, the gun could of has way more detail, how you had it was just a 3 second job, which isn't enough to pass for a gun. The blood looked like paper, it didn't spray, it didn't move like water, it moved like paper, at least make it get smaller or something.
6.5/10
CHUNK:
What am I supposed to say?
backgrounds, designs, texts, everything but the movements was terrible, there was easing, and fluid movements, I'll give you that, and the final part was funny as ****.... but seriously, a joke can't carve a door, no matter how much machinery it gets.
3/10
DEMI ANGEL V.S U-T
DEMI ANGEL:
Backgrounds were nice, movements were nice, easing was nice.
Fire didn't look like fire, fire is not dark yellow with lighter yellow inside it, it moves a bit like fire, but fire waves back and fourth. Particles were nice, when the fire was tossed at the screen, it looked like it was going under the screen, which I don't think was your goal. :/
The close up faces at the end..... were very unappealing, I don't recall anything causing the grey stick the bleed from the eyes or mouth, sure he was hit by fire, but that should burn him, not..... whatever it appeard to do, the other guy just looked weird, could be your style, can't really say.
7/10
U-T
Who was who? The black guy shrank so muc it looked unreal, I couldn't even tell the blue guys are was cut, it was so crowded. The blood, it seems like it teleported, too ****ign fast. The Background was nice, foreground was terrible, didn't even looke like it's even part of that movie. Waslking was good, not great. The sword fell behind the Bg, like the blue guy, which seemed completely carless, and the sword also looked rushed, no sahde, different colors or anything.
How did the black guy even cut the blue guy?
4.5/10
Oct 20, 2008 10:04 PM #276848
Quote from Spitzer
****ing hypocrite
edit: lol the image blends in
What? I don't get it.
Oct 20, 2008 10:04 PM #276849
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Oct 20, 2008 10:06 PM #276854
Homophobia is gay.
Thus making homophobes, the people that are scared of homosexuals, gay. Making them their fear.
I wasn't acting like a homophobe. Even if I was, there would be no hypocrisy since it's a joke.
Thus making homophobes, the people that are scared of homosexuals, gay. Making them their fear.
I wasn't acting like a homophobe. Even if I was, there would be no hypocrisy since it's a joke.
Oct 20, 2008 10:12 PM #276858
i know what homophia is i just miss read it i thought you meant homos are gay (in a non-"no shit" kind of way)
and the ": |" face was at grubber's judging
and the ": |" face was at grubber's judging
Oct 20, 2008 10:14 PM #276861
Quote from Spitzer
and the ": |" face was at grubber's judging
If you give someone a shit rating, without a reason they're gonna get mad.
Oct 20, 2008 10:18 PM #276867
troo dat
also who gives a shit if they rushed
also who gives a shit if they rushed
Oct 20, 2008 10:24 PM #276872
Quote from Spitzer
also who gives a shit if they rushed
Me .
Oct 20, 2008 10:26 PM #276873
apparently •
Oct 20, 2008 10:36 PM #276875
I'm satisfied. I should of added a sign he fan up or something. lol.
Oct 20, 2008 10:40 PM #276879
I disagree with the criticism about my fire. I'll try something else next time though.
As long as everyone could tell that it was fire, I reached my goal. The faces were lazy, I know =/
I'll ty to do better next round.
As long as everyone could tell that it was fire, I reached my goal. The faces were lazy, I know =/
I'll ty to do better next round.
Oct 20, 2008 10:44 PM #276886
Double post mayebh. I'm not on the last page.
For the next round, pick better places to fight, places that will require complex or more complex backgrounds.
For the next round, pick better places to fight, places that will require complex or more complex backgrounds.