http://fwup.net/view/fa7ppadfc9

im so terrible

if you hate it so much why bother posting?

it was ok just needs to be alil smoother

because i need to get better maybe?

we cant do that for you just practice yourself and take criticism to help a little.

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we cant do that for you just practice yourself and take criticism to help a little.

/me facepalms
I posted it to get criticism to get better, I know its bad, therefore me stating at the beginning of my thread, i'm terrible, which implies that i dislike my animation and that o think very little of my animation abilities. Therefore, i don't like my animation, i see there are mistakes, and thats the point i see in posting it.

Uh, just add more frames. More easing, too.

I've seen waaaay better from you. Work on particle dissipation as well.

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Uh, just add more frames. More easing, too.

I've seen waaaay better from you. Work on particle dissipation as well.

i know : <

I loved it.
O.O

Clutch, It's been like a year.

Easing, and dissipation.

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because i need to get better maybe?

Think of how it makes lowly peasants, who would love to animate that, feel if you say THAT is terrible.

If you post it you are expecting crit, so saying you hate it is just annoying.

Anyway, Omega said it. You need more frames, maybe slow the whole thing down a bit.

ha ha, I like the concepts of this. it's really nice actually. It's got a fast pace, it's choppy, but it follows a rhythm . nice job, lol.

i liked it, but i didnt like it
double frames blugh! it doesnt look good double framing
and it needs more frames and easing
still like it though =)

Woah, clutch your style has changes immensly.

What happened to your little thin shaky sticks.

Anyway just ease the parts were there are heavy spacing and it'll look better.
If i was you i'd actually go back to the anim and edit it then repost again.
See the difference.

Thanks for the comments all.