my second dompleted flash
here,s the link:
htt p://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=2492

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your link is messed up
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=2492
you have a space in between t and p i http

i watched it and, i thought the idea was clever and that is was good for someone just starting flash, the red guy looked stiff to me though.

Slanted, full links for people who don't have 20 post are deleted, I believe.
So, that's why band it posted with a space.

Pretty good for a beginner. Try working on some anticipation, the black
stickfigure shouldn't be able to lift his foot so fast just after setting it down.
Otherwise, nice concept.

You're on the right track, keep going.

Opted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good

for ur 2 sencond animation
needs a lot more easing tho

Big Feet :o.....

**** the feet are like two times bigger than they should be

I mean, sure, keep making sticks like that, but it looks ****ing weird.

Yeah that was kinda ****in wierd, fix the feet too.