http://fwup.net/view/6j2c2r85r8

It was especially hard because it was in the sky- I havent even done that with sticks before =/

And the ending is around 70% total shit.
Please comment anyways though, so I can try and improve on my many mistakes.


This is for KSBG btw.


(crit from kinto and sunder force wanted the most <3)

You ****ing Improved

Dramatically!

Your Full Body Style Is Unique, I Love It!

Make More!

Quote from New Generation

You ****ing Improved

Dramatically!

Your Full Body Style Is Unique, I Love It!

Make More!

For the first time ever, I have no idea how to reply to one of your comments o_o


thanks?

I see you have the same problem as I.
Raw action is a bitch.

The first part, was great period.
After the kick, the particles looked lazy, I don't even think I can call them particles, more like a cool shape alpha'd and skewed.

The flying..... was confusing up the ass, too much shit happening.
When they guys charged, you zoomed in, and why? why would you not add detail? the thick lines, and gross sqwiggles were awful.
The firball looked awful, it had few particles in it.
The blade swing looked great actually, wasn't expecting it.
The dissintigration looked...... not good, had no "shwing" to it.
And when the guy was flying forward, he didn't look fast, and where were all the clouds form earlier on?
Getting better.
:/

Quote from Sunder Forge

I see you have the same problem as I.
Raw action is a bitch.

The first part, was great period.
After the kick, the particles looked lazy, I don't even think I can call them particles, more like a cool shape alpha'd and skewed.

The flying..... was confusing up the ass, too much shit happening.
When they guys charged, you zoomed in, and why? why would you not add detail? the thick lines, and gross sqwiggles were awful.
The firball looked awful, it had few particles in it.
The blade swing looked great actually, wasn't expecting it.
The dissintigration looked...... not good, had no "shwing" to it.
And when the guy was flying forward, he didn't look fast, and where were all the clouds form earlier on?
Getting better.
:/

< 3

Shit.
Im seeing amazing anims everywhere.
My eyes are having too much sex.

I see you didn't try towards the end though becuase i only like the beginning parts. :-)

Change the title of the thread to much more better, because it was, loved the ending.

At last, some fullbody that isn't just a bunch of poses. It was very nice and smooth, but it was a bit difficult to tell what was going on.

And the simple filtered sun looked sort of lame.

Why are you awesome ?

T'was really awesome. Oh, shit... You gotta make more.