http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/463557

Obviously you dont have to vote 5(or 10), but think of all the nice things Ive done for you.
Like swear at you.
And chuck you out of my collabs.


Also, all your comments are appreciated.
My first fb submission to newgrounds =D

Wow it looks really cool.

thank you a lot O.O
Ive been worried people wouldnt like it.

<3

That was pretty cool, reminded me of salad fingers, sorta...

I liked the style, but honestly, that was ****ing boring, nothing happened, I know it was an opening to the rest of it (if it's for te mania), and you tried to explain it, but come on ?! The robots didn't look awsome enough, nothing really did anything......
5/10

i agree with sunder.
it was great art but nothing really happend

I like the whole bloody thing.
I watched it three times.

Very unique.

Mesmay, im liking your stuff more and more.

I love it dude.

But in all honesty it could be so much better, art wise.

Smooth out the strokes, make the size a little smaller, and just spend a little more time, still really good.

looking forward to second one.

Wow, very unique, well animated, and to me the art seemed to match the tone of the whole movie.

Great job.

Well honestly if you just turned the smoothening up over the whole animation it would look a little better, though the longer better way would be to zoom in and draw...though I thought it was cool. A non-violent animation is cool sometimes, so great job. It's hard to animate non-violence so good job with that.

I am... disappointed.


That more people don't make movies like this. The art was a bit sloppy, and I expected something a bit more epic, but the plot was much better than most of the stuff around. As in, it had one.

I like it, but from looking at you sig and predicting an epic tale, I am a bit disappointed. But good work regardless.

Quote from XeKia

That was pretty cool, reminded me of salad fingers, sorta...

lol, thanks =3

Quote from Sunder Forge

I liked the style, but honestly, that was ****ing boring, nothing happened, I know it was an opening to the rest of it (if it's for te mania), and you tried to explain it, but come on ?! The robots didn't look awsome enough, nothing really did anything......
5/10

Ok..
Thanks. Im confused personally why some found it boring and others didnt... but ok thanks, I will attempt to make the robots cooler on the second one.
(and btw its not for the mania, it has nothing to do with the mania)
<3

Quote from Mr potato head

i agree with sunder.
it was great art but nothing really happend

ok thanks

Quote from M3D

I like the whole bloody thing.
I watched it three times.

Very unique.

Mesmay, im liking your stuff more and more.

yey

Quote from Strife

I love it dude.

But in all honesty it could be so much better, art wise.

Smooth out the strokes, make the size a little smaller, and just spend a little more time, still really good.

looking forward to second one.

Thanks, I know the arts a big problem now, Im gonna have to improve it for my next anim

Quote from supranova

Wow, very unique, well animated, and to me the art seemed to match the tone of the whole movie.

Great job.

thanks =3

Quote from kinto

Well honestly if you just turned the smoothening up over the whole animation it would look a little better, though the longer better way would be to zoom in and draw...though I thought it was cool. A non-violent animation is cool sometimes, so great job. It's hard to animate non-violence so good job with that.

the art is a problem, i know i know =D
again, itll be better for the second, hopefully.

Quote from Bonk

I am... disappointed.


That more people don't make movies like this. The art was a bit sloppy, and I expected something a bit more epic, but the plot was much better than most of the stuff around. As in, it had one.

I like it, but from looking at you sig and predicting an epic tale, I am a bit disappointed. But good work regardless.

Ok <3 there wasnt actually much of an epic storyline behind it, it was supposed to be a slightly un-normal day for them, if you know what I mean.




So yeah, Im going to try and improve the artwork, make a more dynamic storyline, and just touch up on a couple other areas IF I make a second.
And ONE of these days I WILL impress you Sunder Force. >:3

One day.


Oh yeah and this got Daily Second <3 yey (3.99)

I really liked it, very good.

Very cool. Thanks for the creds <3

I already said I'm not really into this stuff, but I still really like it. It's cute or something.

Looking forward to 2 :3

and yeah, you should higher the smoothing.

whew, I love this one

I was just dissapointed by the shortness.

Im going to be looking forward to seeds 2
Srs