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KmellaArt

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Oct 13, 2008 9:19 PM #272727
Quote from rawgreen
your gorilla has too soft of a contour, try hardening up the lines around the eyes so that they don't look so fuzzy. though that's only of my opinion, but these other comments aren't. The gorilla's picture's softness makes it hard on the eyes to focus on it.

the neck on your buck(if it even is one) has too tall of a neck, it's also not thick enough. you have a goof on the ears too.

A question on the wolf pup. are the legs stretched out in back? because I don't see them.
They'd be visible under the body on the right side if they were tucked in. Or if he was somewhat curled, the back legs and maybe the tail would show on the left side.
the wolf pup drawing is otherwise fine.

All the rendering on you drawings are superb and most fascinating. It's quite encouraging. I hope you're not depressed by my c&c. Good luck on your other drawings.


im actually glad i got a bad comment, because you dont learn without making mistakes x3

thanks :)

i told you all they were terrible! HA i was right XD

lol jokes people, jokes
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Oct 14, 2008 1:40 AM #272853
wut are you talking about that stuff is amazing