Yeah here it is, tell me what you think, keep it constructive please. And yeah sorry I can't upload it straight to here, it'd take way too long, but it's not gonna kill ya to click on the link.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpSo4Hn0fXE

lyrics are dreadful, the song itself isn't so bad though.
not sure what kind of constructive criticism I can offer, all i've really got is an opinion.

keep working on your music, yo

Why are the lyrics dreadful?

I just think they're really corny and stupid, and there doesn't seem to be a constant theme other than the mention of roses..
Don't take it to heart, it's just my opinion, I just think the lyrics are terrible.