Trapped: Writer's Forum Game

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Oct 19, 2008 8:53 AM #275759
This is a writer's forum game, for whoever would like to join.


Rules:
1. The game will work by each member taking turns writing a paragraph of writing ahead of what the above poster's story had told.
2. If you feel like you're so hilarious by saying, "and den he dise lolz the end" then please keep this miserable attempt at humor to yourself.
3. At least let two people speak after you before posting again.
4. If you dont like these kind of forum games, then keep the hell out. Nobody's forcing you to read or play this.
5. You can write more than a paragraph at a time, but keep the maximum of writing per post three paragraphs.
6. Write first person or third person. I couldn't care less.

Now for the storyline... or in other words, my turn. And so that people can continue after me with absolutely no idea whats going on, I am going to exceed the 3 paragraph rule this once.

A boy named Daniel has been kidnapped by an unknown force and has no idea of his whereabouts. The last thing that he had known was that he had been having a great day out, spending time with his girlfriend, Melissa. They were back from eating at a local restaurant and he was standing on the doorstep of her house. The memory was clear in his head; the warm embrace of one another, the tingling senstation, the love, her face, the lips... and then it was dark. About eleven hours later he found himself in the middle of an abandoned warehouse. He was bound to a chair by thick ropes which had been tied tightly with no care for his comfort. In his field of vision he can't see anybody, but he hears mutters of somebody sleeping behind him and footsteps coming from rooms around him. Now that his waking confusions are gone, the real confusion has kicked in.
Where the fuck am I?!
Bending his wrists, he can reach his pockets, in one of them, he remembers he had his pocketknife.
Its gone. Apparently he'd been stripped of his belongings.

Your turn.
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Oct 19, 2008 9:13 AM #275761
Okay I will join.

Daniel becomes more frightened the second. The footsteps are coming closer... and closer.... and closer untill the door knob starts rattling and then the door opens. Light floods in, stinging Daniel's eyes. A person enters and shuts the door behind them. "Hello Daniel' the strange person whispers " My name is Sylvia, we have been waiting for you." Daniel, surprised by this werid woman's coolness become angry " Why am I here? where's my girlfriend? Wtf do you want with me? Daniel shouts angrl. Sylvia smiles and laughs. "All will be answered, but if you like the answers, is unsure, however one thing is sure, your life is never going to be the same ever again! She replies evily.

Is that enough per post?
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Oct 19, 2008 9:20 AM #275764
'And why the hell not?' shouted Daniel, rocking the chair slightly. Sylvia motioned to the guard behind him who had just woken, and he pushed past quickly, adding to the rocking of Daniel's chair. He rushed out the door, and Sylvia shut it behind him.

'Now,' she said, in a low tone, 'We have to get that larvae out of you.'
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Oct 19, 2008 10:27 AM #275781
'' What?! '' Daniel shouted back into Sylvia's face, '' WHAT FREAKING LARVAE?! ''
Sylvia just smiled, '' It is a symbiote lifeform, masterminded by a person we only name MoD ''

Daniel squirmed, he was claustrophobic, and the room was small, '' WHO THE HELL IS MOD AND WHY DO I HAVE A LARVAE IN ME ! ''

Sylvia gave back one of her smack-a-bitch smiles, '' MoD is somebody you will come to know very well, Daniel. As for the larvae .... All in good time ''
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Oct 19, 2008 10:59 AM #275798
"WHAT THE HELL?!" Daniel exclaimed as he saw a pile of maggots falling straight out of his hand.
"THE HELL DID YOU DO TO ME!"
"You should be proud to be the food for the next generation" replied Sylvia calmly.
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Oct 19, 2008 11:15 AM #275806
Daniel's right arm began to bulge. His forearm looked like a balloon, and then it suddenly popped. Blood and maggot-type things sprayed around the room, flying it all directions. The explosion caused the rope wrapped around him to break, and Daniel jumped and breathed heavily. His arm was a mangled mess, and he couldn't move his right hand anymore.

He turned towards Sylvia, but she was on the floor, screaming: 'No! Not me! I am your mother! No, little ones! Ack!' Maggots were forcing their way into her body however and wherever they could, even through her eyesockets, the stress causing one to pop out in a spray of blood.

Daniel yelled for help and bashed at the door.
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Oct 19, 2008 12:59 PM #275881
The door opened, his way, knocking him to the ground. He sat there, eye to eye with Sylvia, who had a huge grin on her face. ''Now, Daniel, are you prepared to talk calm and stop the cursing? I would prefer if you did..', she said, mysteriously. 'But...', Daniel muttered as he looked around and found himself strapped to the chair again. He looked to Sylvia, who began to walk around Daniel and saw the glowing in her eyes. ''What is it Daniel?'', she asked with a mocking tone ''You thought that was real?''. Daniel began to rock the chair again. ''Stay calm, next time I'm making you see even worse things'', Sylvia said, this time with a threatening tone, which quickly changed to a calm one again. Her walk began to change a bit and she came to a halt. '' So, are you prepared to listen, now?''.
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Oct 19, 2008 1:58 PM #275907
"NEVER" Replied Daniel. He didn't believe in magic. But after seeing Alien vs Predator, he didnt want to have his chest bursted by some maggots.
"Oh, is that so?" Sylvia said, smiling as she pulls a knife from her pocket. "Do you want to know how i got these scars?"
Daniel looks at her. "W-What? THAT IS OUT OF SOME MOVIE!!?" "Oh no. My father, well. he was... a drinker. A fiend. one night he went off more crazier then usual. Mummy grabbed a kitchen knife to defend herself with. Daddy didn't like that. Not... One.... Bit. So he takes the knife off her, laughing as he does it. Then, seeing me standing there. He comes at me with the knife. As he comes he says "Why so serious!?". He puts the blade in my mouth, and says again. "Why so serious!?" Sylvia says, and then slashs Daniels face with the knife. over, and over again. Daniel shakes his head, and opens his eyes. Hes still in the chair. Sylvia is laughing, and daniel looks in a mirror. His face is fine. More mind tricks...
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Oct 19, 2008 2:19 PM #275913
MoD stepped back as Daniel glanced at the double glazed window that he had installed so he could watch what Sylvia was doing. Being able to see what they were doing without them seeing him still needed some getting used too it seemed, knew he couldn't dwell on petty things for long as Sylvia could loose control at any minute and kill the subject. He shuddered at the thought of what happened to the last subject, and then realised pity was one of the small shreds of humanity that lingered within him that he longed to exterminate. He rubbed his forearm across his face, effectively scratching the scales that had replaced his skin and concentrated once again on Sylvia's work, silently admiring the dementia that Sylvia created.
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Oct 19, 2008 3:11 PM #275931
Meanwhile, in happytown, cute bears were singing, dancing and enjoying their happy life as a big happy family. Bombo, the leader of the happybears, had decided to have a happyfeast, celebrating the return of their good friend, the dog Louie. Louie was a kind dog, with good taste in music, and all the happybears were happy to have him back in happytown.
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Oct 19, 2008 3:21 PM #275936
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Meanwhile, in happytown, cute bears were singing, dancing and enjoying their happy life as a big happy family. Bombo, the leader of the happybears, had decided to have a happyfeast, celebrating the return of their good friend, the dog Louie. Louie was a kind dog, with good taste in music, and all the happybears were happy to have him back in happytown.


"Oh I just can't gosh darned wait for Louie to come back!" Yelled Skippy the rabbit excitedly.
"I know, I know Skippy, Louie is our best friend for life!" Shouted back Twinky, the carebear leaping from his seat in joy.

Just then the door to the magic palace of fun opened to the delight of the towns people and Louie the dog strode in to cheers and whooping from all the bears and that one rabbit that no one likes but was there any way.
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Oct 19, 2008 3:52 PM #275944
The magic palace of fun exploded in a happy rainbow of delight and cheer as the happy bears danced their dance of joy in celebration of Louie's return. Louie himself did not dance but watched as the happy bears danced for him. Skippy, a wide grin painted on his face, asked "Where were you anyway Louie?"
"i'd rather not say"
"Come on Louie!" The crowd simultaneously burst into similar cries as Louie blushed.
"Okay, gather round people"
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Oct 19, 2008 4:59 PM #275981
Then a massive ****ING METEOR HIT THE GROUND, HOLY ****ING SHIT!
CAREBEAR LIMBS AND FACES AND CHESTS WERE FLYING AROUND EVERYWHERE, THE CASTLE WAS IN CHAOS, I'LL REPEAT THIS AGAIN, HOLY ****ING SHIT!!!

THE CAREBEARS RETREATED, INJURED AND WOUNDED INTO THE JUNGLE, MANY MISSING LIMBS, HAVING THEM BLEEDING HORRIBLY ALONG THE WAY HOLY ****ING SHIT WHAT KIND OF TRAVESTY IS THIS?
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Oct 19, 2008 6:38 PM #276062
Why are there always these attention whores who need to **** everything up?
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Oct 19, 2008 6:39 PM #276063
I now feel greatly complimented, seeing that I was that attention whore.