Inking is harder than it sounds.


Round two, action shot:


I did another one, not of shadow, but it's still concept art...

The waste is was too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

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The waste is wat too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

Aye, I'll probably do a second draft.

Thanks for the critique though.

How do you people draw so good this is my best

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How do you people draw so good this is my best

Because a lot of us have been at it for many years trying to improve.

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The waste is was too small, as are the hands. The bottom of the cape wth the jagged lines, has very little detail, and looks rushed. The top half is good, bottom half needs work.

K, fixed most the stuff you were talking about in the original post. Thanks!

Didn't change the hands though, they are OK with me.

Hmmm, something still seems wrong...
About what you chnaged: The waist looks much better, cape looks better, but not really what I had in mind, I was thinking more along the lines of :


ya know? looks more realistic and has a more "shreaded" feel to it..

For the hands, they just look too tiny in comparison to the rest of the arm:


The left arm is one whole circle bigger then the right.

nice pic and detaild drawing, the only i thing i didnt like was the way he was standing. really good :)

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Hmmm, something still seems wrong...
About what you chnaged: The waist looks much better, cape looks better, but not really what I had in mind, I was thinking more along the lines of :


ya know? looks more realistic and has a more "shreaded" feel to it..

For the hands, they just look too tiny in comparison to the rest of the arm:


The left arm is one whole circle bigger then the right.

Ah I see, I love visual aids!

..I'll see what I can do.

eh. in inking this think the picture got to complicated and is now too hard to edit. Guess I'll have to make a sequel.

I like your new drawings, they both have interesting shots.

Shadow's torso and waist in the first picture look weird.

The second one is fabulus.

The third's arm looks like in a weird position. And those ropes don't look as if they were hanging in the air or whatever.

Nice to see you back, if only for a little while.

Thanks guys!

Yeah I'm going to have to do some life drawing to get a better grasp on shading. For some reason I suck balls at it.