Godfather short

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Mar 8, 2008 2:28 AM #88719
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Vote 5 plez.
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Mar 8, 2008 2:31 AM #88720
I remember seeing the beginning when you posted it. Nice one Apples
I voted 5 :3
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Mar 8, 2008 2:34 AM #88721
Quote from elite34
I remember seeing the beginning when you posted it. Nice one Apples
I voted 5 :3


Told you I would finish.
Thanks there.
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Mar 8, 2008 2:35 AM #88722
i didn't really like it. the shading sucked, the blood needs a lot of work, and the movements were a little awkward.
also the sticks were weirdly drawn.
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Mar 8, 2008 2:38 AM #88723
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i didn't really like it. the shading sucked, the blood needs a lot of work, and the movements were a little awkward.
also the sticks were weirdly drawn.


:c
Wells, I dont remember putting shading in there, so I dont know what your talking about...
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Mar 8, 2008 2:39 AM #88724
exactly its all bland
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Mar 8, 2008 2:28 PM #88873
Well, I am glad this passed with a well score.
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Mar 8, 2008 4:34 PM #88902
If i were you, i would use line a bit more in the animation.
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Mar 8, 2008 4:35 PM #88903
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Told you I would finish.
Thanks there.
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I remember you said you would finish for me. I feel so honored :3
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Mar 8, 2008 8:04 PM #88972
It is good...But it seemed, well just...shakey...and...weird.
But still it was ok...8/10
Work on your blood.:heh:
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May 21, 2008 2:59 PM #139133
Ok That was good
a bit improvement on the fire part!
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May 21, 2008 3:05 PM #139135
Quote from samiran
Ok That was good
a bit improvement on the fire part!


This thread is old, don't bump it...
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May 22, 2008 3:14 AM #139440
one of the main problems, were that the sticks were kinda weird...the blood was also bad though =(