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Oct 26, 2008 5:43 AM #280504
Why no, no it isn't.
My first easy toon , check it yo.
Also someone tell me how to make the floor stay, T.T I cant do it atm.
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Oct 26, 2008 5:52 AM #280513
Pretty awesome. I think I should try easytoon again.
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Oct 26, 2008 6:04 AM #280528
Kicks are really choppy.

Work on the explosion.
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Oct 26, 2008 7:48 AM #280613
Use the line tool for the floor :\
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Oct 26, 2008 6:46 PM #280873
This is why animators on this forum get nowhere unless they learn on their own. People, you have to stop posting such useless comments.

Saha: What are you smoking? Seriously...

Brian: Rather than 'kicks are choppy', tell him to add more frames between the existing ones.

Explosions need work? Perhaps explaining what he should work on would be helpful. Such as the spikes coming out the top and the quick dissipation.

Look at this, Mannequin.
http://z13.invisionfree.com/The_Easytoon_Place/index.php?showtopic=1162

puinkey: Good advice, but I'm sure you could've helped him out more.

No offense to any of you, but we need to start posting more constructively. If you're more skilled than the person you're critiquing, you have an obligation to help them out, even if just to correct one part of their walk cycle or explosion or whatever.
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Oct 26, 2008 10:16 PM #280999
I agree with OG thoroughly.

The explosion was terrible. The spikes made it even worse. My advise is go look at some real explosions (you tube etc) and mimic how they explode.

The kicks were better than the explosion but still horrid. Try making him stand normally, then go up, do the kicks then land again. Add more frame between kicks so that it's easier to see whats going on.

Wobbly line and circle thing? Sorry guys but I got nothing. -.-"
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Oct 26, 2008 11:12 PM #281024
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sorry Ogrilla, but that tutorial is down. I cant find the file and the place I used to host it is out. Hey Mannequin, I think you need to try adding more frames to your animations. Everything happens to quickly, and it is all very stiff. Keep at it, and try different things until you have the hang of drawing frames.
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Oct 27, 2008 1:43 AM #281113
Lol I can properly animate kicks , I was just checking out the program.
I will most likely not use easytoon further, for I have obtained flash 8.
However your advice will not go unchecked.
Thanks.

If this is what I am looking for in the ez/flash section, I am absolutely delighted.
Because I am from the pivot section >.>
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Oct 27, 2008 7:14 AM #281240
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sorry Ogrilla, but that tutorial is down. I cant find the file and the place I used to host it is out. Hey Mannequin, I think you need to try adding more frames to your animations. Everything happens to quickly, and it is all very stiff. Keep at it, and try different things until you have the hang of drawing frames.


So many young animators will now be lost without your great explosion tutorial... :'C

lol, but seriously make another one sometime, if you can. And hell, we could make that one big Flash animating tutorial you had in mind. If you didn't completely lose hope, that is.

And Mannequin, the Easytoon and Flash sections are both more welcoming and helpful than the Pivot section. Or at least we try to be.
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