My second animation in Flash..
I started in Pivot and tryed Flash..its much better! :)
so its tests for:
1.punch
2.kick
3.blood
4.reaction

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=448376

how am I?
C&C PLZ!

Not bad for second.
You must of been good at pivot i'm assuming.

In flash if you press 'Ctrl' and '#' at the same time, you will get a grid.
That should help the problem of your stick resizing.

Also its shaky. Theres no real technique to get rid of this,
it happens to most people when they start flash.
Basically before you post the anim, always take a look at it and
look for those shaky parts and go back to that frame and fix it.
And just take more time unless you have a deadline.

For now just keep animating with those tips I gave you and you should be okay. =D

Quote from M3D

Not bad for second.
You must of been good at pivot i'm assuming.

In flash if you press 'Ctrl' and '#' at the same time, you will get a grid.
That should help the problem of your stick resizing.

Also its shaky. Theres no real technique to get rid of this,
it happens to most people when they start flash.
Basically before you post the anim, always take a look at it and
look for those shaky parts and go back to that frame and fix it.
And just take more time unless you have a deadline.

For now just keep animating with those tips I gave you and you should be okay. =D

I second it, plus try using "onion skins" and not the kind you buy at the store...

Quote from M3D

Not bad for second.
You must of been good at pivot i'm assuming.

In flash if you press 'Ctrl' and '#' at the same time, you will get a grid.
That should help the problem of your stick resizing.

Also its shaky. Theres no real technique to get rid of this,
it happens to most people when they start flash.
Basically before you post the anim, always take a look at it and
look for those shaky parts and go back to that frame and fix it.
And just take more time unless you have a deadline.

For now just keep animating with those tips I gave you and you should be okay. =D

WOW!
thanks for the comment and the tips!
ill use them! :D

and "rawgreen" im using onion skin..:)

more comments plz??

AAHAHAHA
That ****ing sucked. The punch failed and was powerless, the other crap failed like shit too, but hey, you suck yourself, so what the **** does it matter?

Not bad at all...

If its still shaky even when using onion skin, try taking a really close look at the movements frame by frame, and see if there is ever a strange change in size or shape. If somthing of mine ever looks shaky, to me, this helps alot.

Keep it up!