Well my life's been kinda full the last few months and I kinda lost my whole creative side in my studying ect. My girlfriend kindly flicked my little creativity switch back on and I'm hopefully coming back to animating ect =D

So yea C&C on this shit:
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=862247 - Brush and particles
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=683303 - Line and failed lasers
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=817933 - Last animation work before I stopped for the few months or whatever it was.

On a side note, the quality of the work I've seen recently from here has improved ALOT.

I like it.
^^ Just, lazers, SEIZURE!!! lol

Woulda liked some critisism but thanks Rab.

First: A lot of resizing, massively. Also the positions the stick are in, are very unreal, and uncomfortable looking. He bends his legs and moves right and left without falling. Also might want to add some more antic to some more moves? Although it had some. And the particles dissolved very quickly, like the water, dissolved just like that.

I liked the end though, the end moves, nice super move feel to it : P


Second: Add more easing to some hits. He moves to fast, and has some stiffness? Also he resizes a lot near the end, watch that : P might wanna put the grid up (Right click, grid, show grid) Also the attacks looked pretty weak, and it looked like it didn't touch at all. Try to make him connect for one more frame or something.

Third: I like the begin thing :P And that looks a lot better =P might wanna finish that up. To lazy to check for flaws ._. but it looked good.


I'm not the best criticizer in the world, but those are probably some true stuff =P

Work on : Force, particles, fighting..... those seem to be your down points.

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Work on : Force, particles, fighting..... those seem to be your down points.

My physics sorta collapsed, I've already started working on it though. I'll look into more combo stuff and particle effects aswell.

And thanks Ssj. Yea I threw the grid up on the first one but forgot about it on the second, which was actualy done first. I watched the particles double frames and they look alot better on their own. I think i'll avoid water atempts for a while though.

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My physics sorta collapsed, I've already started working on it though. I'll look into more combo stuff and particle effects aswell.

That's ma boi
:Nooooooo: :Nooooooo:

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That's ma boi
:Nooooooo: :Nooooooo:

:D and your eyes appear to be waterfalls.

WELCOME BACK! i miss you <3

Spitzer you son of a bitch.

I like these.

:D

Spitzer you cock!
you killed my ears!!!!
plus you made me think that somthing was wrong with my speakers

good animation tho but resizing and easing a bit more.

ARRR that hurts my ears Spitzer!!!

nice to see you back Scorpi!!

Spitz, what is that and why? <3 though. Hi drifts and other people, never knew I was actully missed. Easingand resizing will be worked on, thanks colt. Happy chocolate-related-holiday aswell.