Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Cai Johnson
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Sep 6, 2007 4:57 PM #57115

Quote from M1CKY
Here is a little animation that took me about 30 mins. Please dont flame, only constructive criticism =]

(mainly testing blood so moves arent very good lol)

http://www.swfup.com/file/25765

Nice, but the pose after punching and kicking was a bit strange to me.

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Nvm, I found a way. Your version didn't let the button work.
Ummm, how do I post it where you dont have to make people click the link? Just wrap st time.

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-25842.swf

WOO
I just use brush and draw on this one. Like.... colored eztoon.

Well, nice one but I thinks (the same as Darknes) that u should use 18 fps

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Sep 6, 2007 6:55 PM #57123

Thanks Cai. Like I said, the blood was the main test so the moves were rushed lol. After having a few other reviews elsewhere I think it needs to be a touch thicker and a bit smoother

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Sep 7, 2007 2:02 PM #57209

The blood was OK, but when someone do animation I think that he should make all animation the best as he can

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Sep 7, 2007 4:10 PM #57213

Yea I agree but it was late and I had school, yet I wanted it finished -Period lol

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Sep 7, 2007 10:22 PM #57243

i wanted to make an obsticle course...i really want to learn how to do fights...but im terrible with choreography..if anybody could help...i would greatly appreciate it....anyway..yeah....lil animation

http://www.swfup.com/file/26265

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Sep 8, 2007 4:56 AM #57328

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-26332.swf
Fine, ok, 18 fps. Also Added a vcam, first try tho.

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Sep 8, 2007 5:04 AM #57329

'nother one.
Tried hard on the vcam.
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-26335.swf
Learnt how to make a button static and not move. I think.

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Sep 8, 2007 5:08 AM #57330

http://www.swfup.com/file/26337

My Cliff run video made it in 20mins.....smoother than i expected but nothing to special.

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Sep 8, 2007 5:14 AM #57331

Quote from Darkness-Darkness
Just insert a lot o keyframes where the button is....
(That is the easy slackerz way)

....well then adventually the animation would just start over again. and the file size would be a lot bigger...
just add this action script to the last frame of the animation:

stop();

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Sep 8, 2007 5:18 AM #57332

Yea thats what I did. : P I gotz moer flashoz skill!! jk

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Sep 8, 2007 5:28 AM #57333

No comments on mine..........

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Sep 8, 2007 6:12 AM #57335

Just post the anim, not the link to a thread that has a link to the anim, anyways, this is the beginners thread. That was awsome.

WOOOO
THIS ANIM STEPPED ME UP^^^!!!
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-26342.swf
Oh yea. Particles.

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Sep 8, 2007 6:20 AM #57336

so no comments on mine huh...i see....well...anyway..yeah mraznbuddy...i like the pencil technique..stick with it

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Sep 8, 2007 6:28 AM #57337

Awwww...... sorry.
Its okay, the anim, just not very smooth, what was the fps?