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When he moves his ligements they are far too stiff. Try to ease a bit more and the closeups werent too bad. Add sound and try to give a storyline.

Having a storyline doesn't make the animation any better.

Animate at 18-24 fps. Move every part in every frame. Have a good day.

Quote from M1CKY

When he moves his ligements they are far too stiff. Try to ease a bit more and the closeups werent too bad. Add sound and try to give a storyline.

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Having a storyline doesn't make the animation any better.

Animate at 18-24 fps. Move every part in every frame. Have a good day.

I think the same about stroyline, but I'm using 18 fps...

Quote from Schwa

Having a storyline doesn't make the animation any better.

Animate at 18-24 fps. Move every part in every frame. Have a good day.

...are u serious? the story is basically the whole part about the animation. wat if killing spree didnt have a storyline in it? it would still be cool but theres like no point in the killing...which there rly isnt. but if it does have a story then the animation would be better....seriously

Thanks mraznbuddy. Well why the closeups if your not going to add a storyline? The storyline is vital and every good animator knows that. It makes the animation better because if it is poorly animated, then people know what the animation is about with a storyline, so its easier to follow. If it didnt have a storyline AND it was poorly animated then it is VERY hard to understand. (You didnt animate too badly though lol). Try to look at it like that.

here, since you were doing blood, i tried. this is in about 3 minutes.

dilland's blood

nice but i think more blood on the ground will be more realistic...

yay the 20 post....

I think it's very unwise to double post so you can gain the ability to post links. You might get in trouble for it.

http://www.swfme.com/view/1162452


Walk Test...Comment

Quote from M1CKY

Lol, I have a fully trained warhound if you would like to use him. His name is Lucifer. =]

Perfect!

The walking test looked more like a running test. Please use the Onion Skin, shown on the bottom left hand corner of the timeline.

Here are some of my OLD anims
1)Bomb - http://www.swfup.com/file/29130#view
2)Practice - http://www.swfup.com/file/28960#view
3)heavy object - http://www.swfup.com/file/28572#view
4)Unnamed collab short - http://www.swfup.com/file/27452#view
5)1st firstperson shooter - http://www.swfup.com/file/27282#view
6)Car chase - http://www.swfup.com/file/27279#view
Ill post the others later.

All those animations were pretty jumpy, work on them. Study Jcamelo's anims, like i study Terkoiz's anims, and you'll get MUCH better SUPER DUPER quickly.

PS: Didn't Bubbleman say NOT to post your collab entry anywhere?

PS(2): the Car Chase is already on the portal.

Raffi, no you won't. He'll just look like a Terkoiz copier.

I to think it is quite jumpy. Try to improve on your blood too, instead of just drawing small lines =]

p.s

Raffi there are certain arts you must master to control Lucifers 'abnormal' abilities. In some time you may learn them and use them for your justice =]

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Raffi, no you won't. He'll just look like a Terkoiz copier.

No, I mean you animate like him, but not like OMG I R TERKOIZEH!

Here's an example. Strills. He studied Terkoiz's animations, animated like Terkoiz, and did HE get flamed? I don't think so.

@ M1CKEY: Well... I, personally, am not a dog trainer.