Quote from aklemoo

Nice but i noticed some problems.Add more fps.And make your sticks slightly thicker ok?And redraw the sticks.Dont take 1 part and convert it to a symbol and move plz

FPS? it's already at 24... try letting it load a bit longer... (correct me if i'm wrong.)

and the redrawing thing... bleah.. I know that's what I should be doing but I really hate it. I will work on that later but just for this anim please bear with me just so I can keep the style constant.

I will play around with making the sticks bigger, though.


I think that you guys are going to like the next scene... if i can pull what I'm trying to do off it's goin' to be nice. Expect it by Monday. 8D

http://img518.imageshack.us/my.php?image=soullesdisappearzx1.swf

lil work of me :)

What is it?It's confusing...

He falls, hes dead (blue is his spirit) and the spirit returns to his body and then he dissapears.

lo l

Nice anim, but work on effects

Quote from alive

It's pretty good. However it is very slow, and, as stated before, the sticks are very stiff. You don't really have to use the redrawing technique, especially if you don't like it, as animating should be fun. How your sticks look is entirely up to you. Good luck with your next scene.

about the speed, I upped the FPS to 36. I know that that might make it a hassle to load, but it was a quick fix for the speed problem, and the anim looks a lot better (imo).

Huzzah! it's a day early:
you might want to let it load for a second before you play it...


[swf="http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6240/pitfight68withbuttonspe6.swf"]height="350" width="750"[/swf]


Changes:
- "fatter" sticks!
- 36 FPS to make the older scenes faster
- new scene!
- new (mediocre) blood effects!
- sound!


very much improvement, imo... keep the criticism coming please!

Quote from clyder

http://img518.imageshack.us/my.php?image=soullesdisappearzx1.swf

lil work of me :)

Work on particles. This is a good beginner attempt, just practice more.

Quote from JAM

Huzzah! it's a day early:
you might want to let it load for a second before you play it...


[swf="http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6240/pitfight68withbuttonspe6.swf"]height="350" width="750"[/swf]


Changes:
- "fatter" sticks!
- 36 FPS to make the older scenes faster
- new scene!
- new (mediocre) blood effects!
- sound!


very much improvement, imo... keep the criticism coming please!

wow thats actually rly good for a beginner. i'd say work more on the blood

Quote from mraznbuddy

wow thats actually rly good for a beginner. i'd say work more on the blood

That was shape tween. It's not frame by frame.

Quote from 0mega

That was shape tween. It's not frame by frame.

huh? The only shape tween in there are the guys' backs. The blood is all rushed frame-by-frames

Quote from JAM

huh? The only shape tween in there are the guys' backs. The blood is all rushed frame-by-frames

He ment tweened in general so its, im my opinion, bad, if you're going to be lazy and tween things try adjusting settings so everything stays in line and connected.

hi i have been messin around with flash and i decided to make a beam and seeing how im a beginner i would like your feed back. there is no head on the stick but i just wanted to try and get the body movements down first.

http://www.filecram.com/swf/491033.htm

Quote from Scorpioxxx

He ment tweened in general so its, im my opinion, bad, if you're going to be lazy and tween things try adjusting settings so everything stays in line and connected.

i dont quite know what you're talking about with the settings, but I went frame by frame and fixed all the tweens. I knew about them, but I wasn't done with the anim.


So the "fixed" one... nothing new but the fixed tweens:
[swf="http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8036/pitfight68withbuttonsta1.swf"]height="350 width="750"[/swf]