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Oct 16, 2007 8:52 AM #63565
uhmm ok uhmmm,,.... you used brush, uhmm congratulations!!!!!!!
uhmm,.... work on.....the.....beam and filters......

Heres something i like to call "LOL"
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=960
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Oct 16, 2007 12:26 PM #63569
hellllllooooooooooooooooo guys c and c pleasseee
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Oct 16, 2007 9:24 PM #63602
lol really a need to bump? and its okay but ur sticks just seem stiff to me.
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Oct 17, 2007 12:15 AM #63615
Quote from iReal
can I get some C y C?


Yes you can.
I liked that you used inverted colors, but don't change invert the colors that slow because the colors invert like every half a second after the blast pretty slow.

Also, the dissolving particles look allright but you should make more frames on the particles.
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Oct 17, 2007 12:58 AM #63629
WOW ZOMG! GREATEST WORK EVER DONE BY ME!!!
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=984

._. lol 30 sec. sketch better than noobs

jk i was bored
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Oct 17, 2007 1:13 AM #63633
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WOW ZOMG! GREATEST WORK EVER DONE BY ME!!!
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=984

._. lol 30 sec. sketch better than noobs

jk i was bored


It was allright I guess.
I see you went for the cartoony look with the fast blur behind the stick and the leg going up before running. Classic.
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Oct 17, 2007 1:32 AM #63635
lol i rly didnt try on that one
heres one of a "real" short animation in working on today. probably finish it later.
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=985

ps: how do u like my new blood style ?
=D
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Oct 17, 2007 1:41 AM #63637
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lol i rly didnt try on that one
heres one of a "real" short animation in working on today. probably finish it later.
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=985

ps: how do u like my new blood style ?
=D


I see you improved on this one a lot!
Nice job!

One thing though, do you use onion skinning? because the legs look very wobbly. I mean it looks like he's cold or something. Also try to stay on the line and not move too much because it looks like he hovers a little.
I like the window, the grafitti, but the blood...well...
to be honest the blood looks like barf, I mean literally it looks like it, you should change the colors but hey, whatever suits you go for it.
Nice job overall.
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Oct 17, 2007 1:47 AM #63639
One thing though, do you use onion skinning? because the legs look very wobbly. I mean it looks like he's cold or something. Also try to stay on the line and not move too much because it looks like he hovers a little.
I like the window, the grafitti, but the blood...well...
to be honest the blood looks like barf, I mean literally it looks like it, you should change the colors but hey, whatever suits you go for it.
Nice job overall.[/quote]


lol 1st thing
i didnt improve much at all. the last animation was just a joke. lol.
and ya i did use onion skin but for some reason it usually ends up looking wobbly when i make small movements, i just need more practice.
and the reason it probably looks like barf is cuz of the dark red. ill change the blood later. also i didnt rly mean that blood. i meant the blood that like "splashed" onto the wall... -.-" i dont really kno how to explain that but o well.
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Oct 17, 2007 1:54 AM #63642
Yeah I understand.
The splash looks pretty cool I mean I zoomed in and saw little details.
=D
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Oct 17, 2007 2:06 AM #63643
Quote from mraznbuddy
lol i rly didnt try on that one
heres one of a "real" short animation in working on today. probably finish it later.
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=985

ps: how do u like my new blood style ?
=D

the anim itself is good but it is wobbly and looks like you made some random weird movements lol. and the blood gushing out is better than the blood on the wall =D just improve the blood on the wall and please remove the yellow/orange in it, it makes it look like throwup
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Oct 17, 2007 4:39 AM #63673
lol im not done animating yet. im just making the guy fight rite now, hitting nothing
then im gonna add some ppl in...ya
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Oct 17, 2007 4:50 AM #63676
Yeah I though you would do that too, I said wtf this guy makes psycho sticks and then I though..hey those look like reaccions to hits, so then I knew that you made the stick get hit first then add the other ppl.
right?

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Oct 17, 2007 4:54 AM #63679
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Yeah I though you would do that too, I said wtf this guy makes psycho sticks and then I though..hey those look like reaccions to hits, so then I knew that you made the stick get hit first then add the other ppl.
right?

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lol ya exactly. cept hes the one whos hitting
and congrats on 200th post
lol...i still have a long way to go
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Oct 17, 2007 5:16 AM #63693
Well, yeah but don't give up.
You got all the way over here to this type of ranking for you to get discouraged.
Keep at it man!
You can do it!
Now go!
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