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Karthago
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Nov 23, 2007 1:04 PM #68876
Quote from adrenalineflash
Well it was tweened 0.o

I just sort of move the pieces...isn't that how you tween sticks?

I am not ready for frame-by-frame stick figures, yet.

Oh and add me on MSN : CriticalDrift@hotmail.com

But I recently got hacked and this guy can shut down my comp whenever he knows I am on, so I will be appear offline until further notice, so I will contact you, sorry =)


temporialy, i dont have msn ^^

well... i never did solely tween my sticks
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Nov 23, 2007 4:31 PM #68889
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[swf=http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-61642.swf]width=450 height=200[/swf]
this is me just doing weird movements. the arm movement is crap but i was working on the legs during the run. and some parts are very choppy but my first time animating at 15 fps so i need to stop spacing. When he jumps its supposed to be some kind of partikulz =D

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C & C plz?

no CyC? still waiting
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Nov 23, 2007 6:05 PM #68897
Ehh, crappy reaction test.
http://www.swfupload.com/view/108308.htm
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Nov 23, 2007 8:28 PM #68906
Quote from Metal Flower
Ehh, crappy reaction test.
http://www.swfupload.com/view/108308.htm


Well, it's choppy and your sticks are wobbly.
I think u should work on movments and physics.

Edit:
My latest animation, I hope it's smooth 'couse basically it's that what I'm was working on.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1063152
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Nov 23, 2007 8:55 PM #68909
Quote from Cai Johnson
Well, it's choppy and your sticks are wobbly.
I think u should work on movments and physics.

Edit:
My latest animation, I hope it's smooth 'couse basically it's that what I'm was working on.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1063152


terrible. very choppy. lol jk. quite good. Can't think of anything bad about that. maybe add a couple of flips etc. to test ur ability :D

p.s. try to make it look less like pivot
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Nov 23, 2007 9:09 PM #68913
Quote from Cai Johnson
Well, it's choppy and your sticks are wobbly.
I think u should work on movments and physics.

Edit:
My latest animation, I hope it's smooth 'couse basically it's that what I'm was working on.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1063152


It was ok but the physics for the jump was a bit wierd.
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Nov 24, 2007 1:37 AM #68957
right
i worked on this an hour maybe over 20 fps
trying to get my easing sorted out
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=733c1904
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Nov 24, 2007 1:41 AM #68958
Quote from mack2k7
right
i worked on this an hour maybe over 20 fps
trying to get my easing sorted out
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=733c1904


it looks alright.....a could of suggestions
1. work on the shape of their heads it looks awkward
2. work on physics it looks like they are fighting on ice
3. work on the fighting coriagraphy (bad spelling)
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Nov 24, 2007 1:42 AM #68959
still haven't gotten cc
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Nov 24, 2007 1:45 AM #68961
cc?? sorry for being ignorant but what does that mean exactly?
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Nov 24, 2007 1:50 AM #68965
comment or critique
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Nov 24, 2007 2:07 AM #68975
ahhh ic my bad i will go look at ur animation and say something about it......im not a pro at flash but....i can give some good advice
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Nov 24, 2007 2:09 AM #68977
ok first thing i noticed was that blue thing what is that supposed to be

and i think u should make it a higher fps because it is a little to slow but the running looks good and the punch thing he does
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Nov 24, 2007 2:29 AM #68986
sorry if i interupted something, but my first flash previews: (on signature)
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Nov 24, 2007 4:46 AM #69013
walk cycle... http://www.swfup.com/file/63556

@madhatter:don't double post.just edit the last post.