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MadHatter

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Dec 14, 2007 8:23 PM #71852
it was alright....didnt think there was enough blood :D
banana could use some work
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Dec 15, 2007 7:19 AM #71936
Quote from secondsight
Got my latest animation
Its for a competition.
Banana Randoness
http://www.swfme.com/view/1230292

that was pretty decent. you should make the stick bounce up a little when it hits the ground.
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Dec 15, 2007 7:20 AM #71937
Quote from secondsight
Got my latest animation
Its for a competition.
Banana Randoness
http://www.swfme.com/view/1230292



Dont listen to em...There are no pyshics it is a stick movie...It has the pyshics you want...(dont let them get to your brain)They want you to conform. More Blood...Add detail to the bannana.
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Dec 15, 2007 7:28 AM #71938
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Its not a punch idiot its a hula, u dont read the posts do u, anyways i was thinking, ti make it look more, hula-like, someone suggested i add a skirt and prefferably hair, and a head.


i ****ing love you! <3
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Dec 15, 2007 1:07 PM #71970
Hey!
I made another anim again! In here the guy made double punch and then
rotate strange a bit. And I know that the falling guy when he flips on the
ground it looks strange again. Well, any was I need See and See.
Rank only if higher then med beg. I think that's all... no! You still don't
have link to the anim, here we go: http://www.swfupload.com/view/101438.htm
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Dec 15, 2007 1:23 PM #71973
spin was strange...
Karthago
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Dec 15, 2007 2:11 PM #71987
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Hey!
I know that you all sayd that I should stick to brush, but I gave another chance to line. It's just an run loop, nothing big, just I think It's my best running so far. What do you think?
http://www.swfme.com/view/1095802
Ow, and nobody still give me some C&C, but I made a short fullbody test. It's my first concret (spelling?) http://www.swfupload.com/view/112931.htm


sorry but: stick to brush... even if you dont want to hear it

that really sucked

@fullbody quite nice for your first concret (spelling? :D) !!!
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Dec 15, 2007 9:24 PM #72082
Hey, thanks Karthago, but could you say me something about my latest anim?
Here it is:
http://www.swfupload.com/view/101438.htm I already posted it, but you don't tell me anything
about it... and I want you to do it ^^
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Dec 15, 2007 9:31 PM #72086
looks cool.

you improved really!

things i disliked:

legs-> bit too curvy in my opinion
reaction of the left guy-> his arms aren't moving when he gets hit i think thats a bit unnatural... and when he gets knocked down, the flip looks weird.

things i liked:
blood looked cool (not perfect)
the spin of the violet guy in the end
the legmovements [excepted their designs]

im out of ideas now...

its pretty well eased and smooth
Cai Johnson
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Dec 16, 2007 6:22 PM #72289
Hey!
It's me again, and as always I add "Hey!" to the beggining, well doesn't matter.
But you know what matters? That I made another tests!
Yay! This time double kick with punch and something else I don't know how to say in English ;D.
Anim: http://www.swfupload.com/view/103076.htm
Ow, and about that preloader: I made it basing on SPP's as you can see,
but you can say me about it something also ^^.
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Dec 16, 2007 6:25 PM #72290
Arrite guys! I have an animation.

The kick I just added for bleh, but I was mainly practicing running.

http : // www . swf me .com /view/1273722

(Sorry for posting it like that, I am not alloud to post actual URL's yet, so yeah.
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Dec 16, 2007 6:42 PM #72291
http://www.swfme.com/view/1273722
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Dec 16, 2007 7:37 PM #72299
i have been working on this for a day now,
im really new (4 days) to flash so don't expect much
well, here ya go
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Dec 16, 2007 8:01 PM #72303
Cai? do you use mx or cs3?

please pm me... i liked your newest one but i dont have the time to specify myself sorrz
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Dec 16, 2007 9:32 PM #72317
Toasis I liked it, especially for being 4 days old with flash. Try to work on your physics and thicken your sticks a little. Study other animators anims, then when you feel comfortable create your own style and eventually people will like it.
@ Shanto - Try to add more frames inbetween and with that sort of run where he really brings his leg hight make him travel further. Choppy too.
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