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Nov 13, 2009 5:41 AM #512874
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Nov 14, 2009 12:41 AM #513060
This had sound. I don't know why it doessn't now. When I play it in Flash, the sound works, but it doesn't here....Oh well. Tell me what you think. My first animation.
http://filebox.me/view/jsui564er#share
There isn't really a plot. but basically the red guy makes some cloneswhich the black guy disposes of instantly. and then the black guy goes over and pwns the red guy with a jump/spin kick and beast punch. I drew the red guys with a mouse in school since I didn't have my tablet, so I understand that they're absolutely terrible.

I also realize that the black character gets much smaller by the end.
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Nov 14, 2009 3:47 PM #513224
Quote from Spleko
This had sound. I don't know why it doessn't now. When I play it in Flash, the sound works, but it doesn't here....Oh well. Tell me what you think. My first animation.
http://filebox.me/view/jsui564er#share
There isn't really a plot. but basically the red guy makes some cloneswhich the black guy disposes of instantly. and then the black guy goes over and pwns the red guy with a jump/spin kick and beast punch. I drew the red guys with a mouse in school since I didn't have my tablet, so I understand that they're absolutely terrible.

I also realize that the black character gets much smaller by the end.

Right well, when the black guy was doing the air flying kick thing I saw a really horrible glitchy, freezy movement where the spacing was to big so yeah, that needs fixing. Also instead of just making the guy fade out just copy and paste him into a different layer so that you can still do blank keyframes with you fighting guy and the dead stick still doesn't move. and when he has finished punching he should have carryed on for a bit because the momentum would have carryed him forward. also work on easing cause I didn't see any.
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Nov 14, 2009 7:49 PM #513297
anybody see my anim?
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Nov 15, 2009 12:21 PM #513609
I made this last week, I wanted to wait until I could post links before I posted it.

http://www.truploader.com/view/441831&lb=y

This was made on my laptop so the resizing is frequent.
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Nov 15, 2009 12:54 PM #513617
Nice job Wsheerio icant post anims due to the 20 post thingie
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Nov 15, 2009 7:24 PM #513724
Hey that was pretty good, you just need to work on the stick having more gravity applied to it, in the air, when he jumps, he should gradually slow down, until he is almost at a stop, then gradually speed up until he hits the floor. Then he has to have a way to take in the shock of landing, which is usually done by rolling, or simply bending down. Keep practicing :D

EDIT: Ahhh! I hate the beginner's thread! Nobody ever comments my animations! Shmelemuhgleubiu...
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Nov 16, 2009 10:06 PM #514035
This is the ROUGH DRAFT of the first combo of my new Flash, which is yet to be named. Its going to be over a minute (Project requirements for Graphics 2), so this is very little of the whole. The basic plot though:
The brown guy has Ichibi (One tailed bijuu, for those who watch/read naruto) sealed inside him.
It starts with the purple guy standin there, Ichibi runs in, says something about never finishing their last fight, purple says that ichibi isn't worth killing, yadda yadda. Ichibi jumps, fires a spike outa the ground (really crappy in the animation right now, but will fix later) from a few feet away. Purple teleports, and combos ichibi down to the ground, further insults him.(This is where its at right now). From there on Ichibi basically pwns Purple, constantly telling him to "Release it", but purple insists he doesn't need to. Eventually it comes to a stand still, and Purple releases his two tailed form since he has Nekomata inside him, and proceeds to pwn ichibi with Lightning fast attacks, Dark energy attacks, and some beast claws.
http://filebox.me/view/2hhby2p2x
and when Nekomata(Purple) transforms, he'll look something like this.
http://filebox.me/view/sbcxxhp2t

Tell me what you think.
Im going to add a background, and sound effects and things like blood spatter at the very end. Right now I'm just looking for critique on the idea and the basic movement like the running.
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Nov 16, 2009 10:45 PM #514053
The animation has potential.
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Nov 17, 2009 4:49 AM #514149
here is my game again. I haven't worked on it, I just wanted to repost it.

oh and here's something else:
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Nov 17, 2009 4:57 PM #514222
This is my first long animation i made.
http://www.filebox.me/view/4q349bcv2
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Nov 17, 2009 9:19 PM #514267
All the animations posted before are great =)

I'd like you to look at the first part of the first animation I've done that's able to be shown XD other ones were so bad XD

I'll be happy if someone with more than 20 posts can put the link =)


http:// www. truploader. com/view/508670&lb=y

Thanks for giving me your opinion =)
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Nov 17, 2009 11:07 PM #514300
Very nice job.


Heres more of my tails animation.
http://filebox.me/view/egxfbrnsu
Keep in mind that I'm going to be adding sound, text, and effects like blood spatter at the very end.
Im also going to make the rock spikes look like actual rock from the ground kinda. They wont just be a solid color in the end. The ones there now are just to give me an idea so I can get the stick figures movements right.

Also if anyone could give me a very very in depth tutorial for buttons in Actionscript 3.0 via PM, or give me a link to a very good tutorial, that would be great. I've been struggling with making a title sequence that has a play button, but I keep messing something up.

Constructive critisism is great.
~Spleko

Oh and anyone who can help me make tremor effects would be greatly appreciated as well
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Nov 18, 2009 3:53 AM #514369
Quote from Joshua ice-knight
All the animations posted before are great =)

I'd like you to look at the first part of the first animation I've done that's able to be shown XD other ones were so bad XD

I'll be happy if someone with more than 20 posts can put the link =)


http:// www. truploader. com/view/508670&lb=y

Thanks for giving me your opinion =)


link doesn't work for me
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Nov 18, 2009 4:35 PM #514553
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link doesn't work for me


did you remove the spaces? worked for me when I did that
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