my new movie is gonna be long so i prefer to post it in the main flash page so no more beginner ok ;)

Can somebody comment on my flash on the page before this, cause nobody has yet, it's a first.

OK OK HERES THE TRAILER OF ACID FEAR

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s134/skinkt/acidfeartrailer.swf

My first try with blood http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=f8re4.swf.Anyone who is willing to mentor me please pm me. Comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks
Also if anyone knows a blood tutorial please give me a link, besides the one that Paperclip made. And yes I did use Google, but I could not find any decent one.

This is my first flash video , I have creat it in a day , for testing effets and buttons .

I have 12 years and I am French , I read english tutorial so you think its difficult for me :/ ...

So : http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mercenaryserieepisodeiag2.swf

I know Terkoiz , a very good stick creator (The creator of "Unbalanced" and "Failed Containment"), I have him on MSN , but I don't see him often , i don't know why , but he is very nice , and I think he can help me if I have some problems

Comments my video please , I think its too short , and to fast , but I can't think its "BAD" , isn't it ?

@mrpozo- That was pretty sweet but I'm not good with action script so can't help you.

@skinkt - That was pretty good for a first. Work on the blood, and make the stick bigger.
- Your second movie trailer thing was just a slideshow. The art was not good, sorry. Make the stick bigger, or did you wanted to make it fullbody? Work on drawing things at angels. Good luck animating.

@fanoto- It wasn't much just a bunch of clicking then tweening. Make real animations with real movements. Good try though.

@ chinaman- give the stick some feet, the blood fell kind of slow and choppy. raise the frame rate.

@gnougnou- The animation was really choppy. Fix the button, because I had to right-click and press forward then play before I could see the movie. Work on the blood, make the stick bigger and don't use gradients unless you can use it correctly.

Sorry I used translator so it might be a bit wrong.

L'animation était vraiment variable. Fixez le bouton, parce que j'ai dû right-clic et pression en avant puis jouer avant que je pourrais voir le film. Travaillez au sang, rendez le bâton plus grand et n'employez pas les gradients à moins que vous puissiez l'employer correctement. Désolé j'utilise un traducteur si désolé s'il n'est pas correct.

You people should comment the animation above yours before posting. They want criticism and comments too.

Thanks dragonballz4,improved...hopefully.
I used to comment more but every time I posted I felt that I had to use diffrent words for the same advice, so I guess I ran out of things to say, you know. Probably not but you reminded me about the other begginers to flash so thanks.....again.

Change the head because since the 2 feet were placed like that, the way the head was put to the side was werid. Just keep practicing and you will definetly get better.

No problem man =].

its not very french but I have understand ^^

For the blood , I need some help : how I can do good blood ?
For the button , click more down , but I know , their is a bug with the button , and I don't know why .... I have selectionate the "button aera"

I have not understand the word "gradients" , what's that ? , even in french , I don't understand O_O'

and what do you call "choppy"

A last question , you have saying me the probleme of my animation , but can I having if you think its so good or .... bad ^_^'

That was pretty good

Quote from gnougnou

its not very french but I have understand ^^

For the blood , I need some help : how I can do good blood ?
For the button , click more down , but I know , their is a bug with the button , and I don't know why .... I have selectionate the "button aera"

I have not understand the word "gradients" , what's that ? , even in french , I don't understand O_O'

and what do you call "choppy"

A last question , you have saying me the probleme of my animation , but can I having if you think its so good or .... bad ^_^'

Well, gradients are fills that go from one colour to another.

Choppy is where the animation skips around. Hard to explain in terms that you would understand.

Seeing as you're French, and your English is at times hard to understand, you might have problems in this community.

@gnougnou those 2 orbs are gradients. I thought it was a good try for a first. Keep trying man and you'll get there.

Here are my next bad animations :P

I tried to make them good, but i couldn´t.

What I´m making false?

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-6129.swf 4th one
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-6128.swf 5th one
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-6127.swf 6th one
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-6126.swf 7th one
:D

hello all !!!

Yes I know my English is bad -.-"


I have creat the second part of Mercenary serie , but I have a small probleme ... :

The dimention of imageshack are to big and my animation is not too height , so we can see the "defaults of my video"

>>> http://img300.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mercenaryepisodeiieq5.swf

The loading is quite long , so wait ^^

Sorry I use a shit translator :
if you could help me so that one can see the limits of video just they would be sympathetic

And the button don"t bug , just wait a small moment before click on it

really not good, sorry to say so but it really is bad