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Feb 28, 2010 9:27 PM #551977
So...Any problems?
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Feb 28, 2010 10:27 PM #552001
Quote from dfr179
I checked if it was a coding problem.
But look t this.
I made a platforming game.
http://www.truploader.com/view/843643
left and right are to move.Space is to jump.
The text is a button that doesnt work.


looks funny :D

you made that for the forum? :)
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Feb 28, 2010 10:41 PM #552002
Nah.. looks good. Now animate it! :D
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Feb 28, 2010 10:42 PM #552004
yup.
Sure did.

So....what dont the button work.
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Mar 1, 2010 12:51 AM #552022
I need/want to learn to code simple stuff like that, like jumping and collision and stuff
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Mar 3, 2010 1:07 AM #552486
Whoa This took me longer than I thought :T
BUT
I figured out how to use the line tool.......
I just dont know how to make stick's like in Easytoon.
lol
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Mar 3, 2010 4:21 AM #552600
lol i just make the line tool thicker and draw a stick figure, it works...
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Mar 3, 2010 4:37 AM #552612
This is my actual first animation ever, but I didn't think it was worth putting on here but lol oh well

[swf=http://filebox.me/files/mw9xup74x_Jewie.swf]height=400 width=550[/swf]
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Mar 3, 2010 5:04 AM #552622
With some practice My flashes will look just like my easytoons :3
THEN AHLL BE EPIC!
I already know the arms are UGLEH but ill make another anim later
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Mar 3, 2010 5:13 AM #552626
nice, i havent tried fighting or combos yet, mainly because i cant draw that great and looks more humorous, i just to ideas to practice with until i get my own style
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Mar 3, 2010 5:45 AM #552634
Quote from Moch12
With some practice My flashes will look just like my easytoons :3
THEN AHLL BE EPIC!
I already know the arms are UGLEH but ill make another anim later
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okay, first of all, I think you should add a floor. The stick seems to rise as he progresses forward. The trails are quite poorly drawn, not in motion o r flowing at all. Your movements are weird, the head moves wrong in relation to the body. The physics are pretty off at the jump; there isn't enough anticipation, so it looks like he is sent up by some other force, and then when he comes down it should look like he is forcing his way down. When one is in the air, he can't control the the speed by which he moves to the ground. When you eased him down, it looked like this: |-|--|---|------------------|--------|---|--|-| which to me looks kind of like an attack move. When anything is falling to the ground, the easing should be more like this: |-|--|---|----|------|----------|--------|------|----|---|--|-| which is a more gradual and slow way of doing it, which looks more natural. At the end when he falls kicks down, to me it looked like he was floating down because of the direction in which he moved. He shouldn't have moved so slowly or diagonally. Remember, the way one falls usually mirrors the direction he went up. Also almost everything needs a little more anticipation
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Mar 3, 2010 5:59 AM #552639
Quote from Vendetta
okay, first of all, I think you should add a floor. The stick seems to rise as he progresses forward. The trails are quite poorly drawn, not in motion o r flowing at all. Your movements are weird, the head moves wrong in relation to the body. The physics are pretty off at the jump; there isn't enough anticipation, so it looks like he is sent up by some other force, and then when he comes down it should look like he is forcing his way down. When one is in the air, he can't control the the speed by which he moves to the ground. When you eased him down, it looked like this: |-|--|---|------------------|--------|---|--|-| which to me looks kind of like an attack move. When anything is falling to the ground, the easing should be more like this: |-|--|---|----|------|----------|--------------|-------------------|which is a more gradual and slow way of doing it, which looks more natural. At the end when he falls kicks down, to me it looked like he was floating down because of the direction in which he moved. He shouldn't have moved so slowly or diagonally. Remember, the way one falls usually mirrors the direction he went up.


Fix'd.

Sorry, it had to be done. =p
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Mar 3, 2010 6:07 AM #552640
Well yeah.... but when I typed the easing out I was referring to his reaction to landing.

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Mar 3, 2010 6:26 AM #552643
Okay, now i see it, my bad.
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Mar 3, 2010 7:37 AM #552657
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