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Mar 3, 2007 5:21 AM #25125
Thanks, I never saw that show but I'm sure its fantastic.
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Mar 3, 2007 5:37 AM #25128
Lol its acually really bad =D. I just watched it cause i was a dumb 6 year old =).
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Mar 3, 2007 5:40 AM #25129
The body should move up and down during the walk, only a little though. It was kind of choppy. Keep working on it.

@miphisto55. That cartoon would of entertained me for hours back then.
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Mar 3, 2007 8:20 AM #25137
Just another attempt to get better at flash, but this time its a punch test. I really dont like the blur that much but I thought it would be a good enough opportunity to try it out.

You know what to do Your suppost to comment and criticize
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Mar 3, 2007 10:59 AM #25145
nar didnt like that blur. but gj.

my run test lol:
http://www.swfupload.com/view/106272.htm
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Mar 3, 2007 7:18 PM #25185
this is my second animation though it's really just a test
it not done yet i might make it a full animation

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i kno i should be starting with sticks but...
either way i suck(for now...)

edit: Sorry bout the pause forgot to delete the left over frames
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Mar 3, 2007 7:34 PM #25189
Ok chinaman, it was pretty smooth but also choppy at the same time. The initial punch and stuff was good, looked very forcefull and had good anticipation. Personally i don't mind if it has a blur or not. I don't think the blur looks all bad.

Sticks changed size a bit but its was good.

Mitsuki, you animation was just really weird lol. Really you should start of with sticks. Kinda hard to give you advice on that.

Bam, your runinng was pretty decent and i liked it. The fire on his head was also pretty smooth. Not really that much was wrong with it. Just make sure all your body parts look connected.
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Mar 3, 2007 7:45 PM #25190
all ill start with sticks

heres my frist stick animation i got the bow idea earlier form watch someones animation. thought it was cool so...

oh that the lil lines that show up are kunai (ninja weapons) its hard to draw them small not to mention with the this damned mouse of mine

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damn that stupid pause is there again seems longer to me..

ok since noone has posted here since this ima add the second part its not done and i think i forgot to change the color of one of them before i logged of but if i did ignore it
plz

and yes for those who (might) nagg me on this it is supose to be a naruto reject i geuss

that damn show has been stuck in my head for three days now GAH!!
its a good thing Ninja pwn
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Mar 4, 2007 5:43 AM #25252
Mitsukai, your first one was.......but your second one was choppy, I really could not tell what was going on half the time due to it being so short and with that long ass pause.

Bam-s13 good job, the running was mostly smooth but the head was too wobbly. Also the joints did not always connect properly.

Another test, at the end I know about the back joints not being connected properly but I didnt see it until I already hosted it.
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Mar 4, 2007 10:04 AM #25256
Hey I just posted this, and it turned out way better than I was expecting so check it out, here's a link: stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/wall-slam.html
You'll have to paste that in the address bar because it won't let me post url's sorry
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Mar 4, 2007 2:58 PM #25269
Thats pivot not flash-_-
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Mar 4, 2007 3:37 PM #25275
My first Flash ... :) hope you like it !!
http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cloudspy0.swf
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Mar 4, 2007 5:37 PM #25297
xfireanimator that was really cool

lol it took me awhile to kno what it was (thought something was gonna happen heh) but i liked it
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Mar 4, 2007 7:10 PM #25308
Well, I've been absent a while, but I've started back up with Flash. I'm in the proccess of making a new animation..tell me what ya think of it so far.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/109073.htm

I'm calling it 'Random Events' since it is..well, random.

I might add a background later, as well..

Edit: Xfireanimator, nice job on those clouds, I loved the effect. Hmm... If you stare at it long enough, the gray part seems to turn white xD
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Mar 4, 2007 7:53 PM #25312
Quote from mitsukai
xfireanimator that was really cool

lol it took me awhile to kno what it was (thought something was gonna happen heh) but i liked it


Thanks :)
I made more :P (at the moment i am not that good with walking tuts , and stuff like that)
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