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Feb 7, 2012 6:58 AM #589207
nice try, but you need to learn the basics. Try to make somebody walk or run

I have already posted this anim, but nobody CnC... could you this time
http://www.fileize.com/view/f81cce44-f03/
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Feb 7, 2012 1:54 PM #589379
That's pretty good. Figures stay clean and don't get distorted throughout. Very clean cut and I like the effects. Well done.
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Feb 7, 2012 2:16 PM #589389
Is this a little better? http://imageshack.us/clip/my-videos/338/zqt.mp4/
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Feb 7, 2012 2:29 PM #589395
http://www.fileize.com/view/f199729c-510/ whadya think?
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Feb 7, 2012 3:11 PM #589425
Whilst I'm far from an expert at flash I'm going to attempt to CC these.
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Your main concern should be spacing (aka slow it down), you need to make it much clearer what you're actually doing. And you need to apply the basics of animation (easing etc)

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There's a similar issue with this one as well, It's hard to tell that he's punching at the beginning. Although aside from that it's good, better then what I could do.
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Feb 7, 2012 5:51 PM #589502
Not exactly sure if this would qualify as a flash animation (made on my DSi, saved it to an SD card as an animated Gif, then stuck it on my computer :/ ), but posting it here is better than nothing. The animation is a sniper firing, reloading, and firing again. I made as a representation for my school teacher (there really are Game design courses :3) for a game I'm designing. I'm hoping to, when I'm done, post it online :D. Wish me luck!!!

http://i.imgur.com/QZq2V.gif
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Feb 7, 2012 6:26 PM #589519
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Not exactly sure if this would qualify as a flash animation (made on my DSi, saved it to an SD card as an animated Gif, then stuck it on my computer :/ ), but posting it here is better than nothing. The animation is a sniper firing, reloading, and firing again. I made as a representation for my school teacher (there really are Game design courses :3) for a game I'm designing. I'm hoping to, when I'm done, post it online :D. Wish me luck!!!

http://i.imgur.com/QZq2V.gif
nice job bro why u no get flash
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Feb 7, 2012 6:28 PM #589521
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nice job bro why u no get flash


Well, technically, I have to use my dad's computer, since my computer's motherboard got fried :(, and my dad won't let me download anything unless it's for school :/
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Feb 7, 2012 8:41 PM #589590
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My Dad Won't Let Me Download Anything Unless It's for School :/

Me too... but Sometimes lol.
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Feb 8, 2012 7:16 PM #590113
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http://www.fileize.com/view/45e983fb-b03/
A assignment given to me at a monday, in 9 AM in the morning, when I was still sleeping...
2 months rust.

Nice, what Scar said.
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Feb 8, 2012 7:26 PM #590118
really nice effects there
good job
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Feb 8, 2012 10:51 PM #590297
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http://www.fileize.com/view/45e983fb-b03/
A assignment given to me at a monday, in 9 AM in the morning, when I was still sleeping...
2 months rust.


That was actually really good.
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Feb 9, 2012 4:27 AM #590547
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Nice, what Scar said.


Any recent animations?
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Feb 11, 2012 7:12 AM #592159
Hey guys. posted this a few days back on FA and it got sent into the void. Look i'm just new to animating. i dont expect a 10/10 but come on. i'm just starting. a few more practice and i should get better.any who http://www.fileize.com/view/2ddb4ba2-83a/
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Feb 11, 2012 10:21 PM #592466
it looks cool for a beginner :)
just try to aninate more frames in order to make it fluider, but also be aware of physics and easing processes of which you must know. (when something slows down / gets faster). in your anim everythings the same speed (and too fast), through more frames it gets
a) slower
b) better (through easing)
c) better to understand
d) gets more impact through building up force by anticipation
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