Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Dec 9, 2012 1:59 AM #811293
Ok, to make myself better I just drew a ball going through an obstacle course. :) http://minus.com/lvRAgDirx1Lq6

Because, it's hard for me to make stick fights that look good without knowing how x amount of frames looks natural in x FPS. So I did this in 18 FPS, and I did some things like double framing some parts where the ball is about to jump, and I think it turned out pretty well! I also now know a little more on how to draw stuff being launched through the air.

But I tried drawing some sticks and it's still pretty hard. :( oh well
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Dec 9, 2012 3:08 AM #811364
My first animation it is pretty short though.

http://www.fileize.com/files/9935f957/344/First_fight_1_1.swf
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Dec 9, 2012 4:58 PM #811980
I posted this in the wrong thread by accidentals *facepalm*
this is my 5th ever flash animation
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Dec 10, 2012 3:09 AM #812567
http://www.fileize.com/view/2faf2d32-084/
I would like some CnC on what needs improvement and what's okay so I know what to work on. Thanks for any feedback!

Loginid, that animation was very nicely done! The only problem I found was a lack of acceleration at the second big jump, unless you were going for a light dive?

Tanith, what program did you use to make that? It's pretty small and the ground died in the first frame, but the stickmen were pretty fluid. Although, I couldn't quite tell if the knee landed its mark. Try to make it bigger and easier to see.

T mR, that was very well done and ridiculously smooth. It could be just a tad bit faster though. Try animating a second dude that he beats up, and see how good you are at animating the impact of each hit.
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Dec 13, 2012 5:00 PM #816019
that was smooth, I'm guessing your inspiration is Hyun, is he ?
I made a animation that looks 3d for my sig.[video]http://www.filz.us/cs7[/video]
do you see it ?

EDIT: to big for sig. dammit
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Dec 13, 2012 9:17 PM #816185
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that was smooth, I'm guessing your inspiration is Hyun, is he ?


I watched his Youtube tutorials, but it wasn't any particular animator that inspired me to animate. It was a small part StickPage, and the rest I refuse to tell you.
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Dec 14, 2012 11:26 AM #816927
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I watched his Youtube tutorials, but it wasn't any particular animator that inspired me to animate. It was a small part StickPage, and the rest I refuse to tell you.


now you have tell me, you made me curious
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Dec 14, 2012 8:14 PM #817172
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now you have tell me, you made me curious


It's a secret I'm taking to my grave. NOPE.
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Dec 15, 2012 12:29 AM #817348
lol ok, but what do think off my animation?
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Dec 15, 2012 12:54 AM #817372
Here two test i did out of boredom last weekend, pretty unhyped:

http://filz.us/cDq
http://filz.us/cDm
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Dec 15, 2012 1:03 AM #817383
Ghombeat, ur anims are smooth but need more movement,like realistic movement.

The first one i lol'd, the second one was amazingly smooth.

not enough force on the attacks, and try working on character reactions as in when they get hit.

I am a begginner too guys! :D
i posted most of my shit on threads, so im gonna post my latest anim:
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it sucks i know, but i wannsta here some cnc on here as well sooo... ya

thanks
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Dec 17, 2012 1:43 PM #820571
I am a beginner

It hasn't finished yet
http://www.fileize.com/files/76ecf35a/fbc/FireMaker_Scene_1.swf
This my first fire effect hope you like it and comment it
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Dec 17, 2012 6:29 PM #820756
An unfinished speedbattle due to Adelais.net Manteinance work. (Did it in about an hour and some mins)
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Dec 17, 2012 6:32 PM #820762
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Seppuku-Toss-Jump-Tornado-Sleep-Stab. That's pretty darn smooth, except for when he suddenly drops down. Really good though, considering it was done in an hour =P
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Dec 17, 2012 6:55 PM #820773
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Seppuku-Toss-Jump-Tornado-Sleep-Stab.


Oh, you forgot the Uppercut at the start.

EDIT: And the "Balls Grap" before "Sleep"