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Jan 17, 2013 6:09 PM #853580
Some little tests about style i did some weeks ago, the first took me 30-40 mins, the seconds one (who i wasn't able to finish) took me an hour and 20-40 mins, the third one took me 1 hour and 20 mins:

First One
Second One
Edit: The Third One

I ask for CnC.
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Jan 17, 2013 6:17 PM #853585
they're a bit too short to give a proper CnC to. i'd say the second one that pivot around the waist with the legs not moving was pretty weird.
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Jan 19, 2013 3:45 PM #855617
This is my first animation that I didn't bag. Kinda short though :/. http://www.fileize.com/view/a9f9aa68-4e1/ Cnc please!
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Jan 20, 2013 1:05 AM #856019
I've been animating from i believe, 2 years ago, or like last year january. Butti took a large break, and i'm animating again. I'm suffa Rusty, haven't animated in i think more than 5 months. ._.

http://www.fileize.com/view/d80be2a7-2a8/
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Jan 20, 2013 2:21 AM #856069
My (unfinished) RHG demo. :D

http://www.fileize.com/view/4b349d79-339/
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Jan 20, 2013 4:30 AM #856193
Hey everyone sparing droid here I have spent an hour on this animation so please be constructive with your comments.
My deepest apologies for it being a download link, for i have no idea what a good up-loader's link is. I have ran at least 30 scans on the file to make sure there are no viruses, and they all came up dry. LOVE you all :D

http://www.sendspace.com/file/cueyla
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Jan 20, 2013 11:16 AM #856401
Second animation posted on this site:
http://www.fileize.com/view/f4e45302-3c7/

Would love some tips especially on Reaction and how force can be better applied. Used a V-cam on this and found out that it distorts(don't really know) the edges of my sticks.

This time, I used a 16 FPS instead of 13 FPS like last time. Criticism and as I said, tips would be nice.
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Jan 20, 2013 3:35 PM #856599
Quote from Parasite
This is my first animation that I didn't bag. Kinda short though :/. http://www.fileize.com/view/a9f9aa68-4e1/ Cnc please!


Not too bad for a first. I think the number one thing you should be doing right now is spending a lot of time practicing drawing the stickman. Especially in different positions. Then spend a lot of time going through other peoples animations frame by frame to see how they draw them and to get a feel for how they space the frames out.
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Jan 20, 2013 4:12 PM #856636
Thank you! This helped a lot!
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Jan 20, 2013 8:43 PM #856815
http://www.fileize.com/files/706f6c16/715/fight.swf

Why do i need an admin to look at my post before it shows up. It wasn't like this before so if someone would explain that would be great. and i apologize to the admins for spam.
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Jan 21, 2013 7:56 PM #858054
I know its horrible and i did this because i was trying to get a feel for movement by copying kung fu cooking girls and making a stick version of it. 4 seconds long and took me about 8 hours to do. <.< but this is literally my first animation.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKYXNC7BotM
hope you enjoy XD oh and no sound.
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Jan 22, 2013 5:04 AM #858672
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you are not a noob!!! what the hell are you doing here ! I can't give you tips, because I am a noob. I made this out of boredness, give me CnC on the blood and face, thanks

[video]http://megaswf.com/s/2544531[/video]

the red box on the head was suppost to be a guidline, sorry

EDIT: I made a 112 fps test for fun :D
[video]http://megaswf.com/s/2544553[/video]


Oops sorry i havent logged on for quite a while lol.. Atm im on my phone ill check it tomorrow
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Jan 22, 2013 6:10 AM #858718
Quote from Cronos
Not too bad for a first. I think the number one thing you should be doing right now is spending a lot of time practicing drawing the stickman. Especially in different positions. Then spend a lot of time going through other peoples animations frame by frame to see how they draw them and to get a feel for how they space the frames out.

my apologies. when I said first animation. I meant first that i felt confident enough to post. I have made millions of run loops and combos. never said they were good lol.
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Jan 22, 2013 10:16 AM #858789
My other posts are usually late in getting approved and fails to get a CnC. Dunno why but no matter.

Would love a CnC on my 3rd post, please considering my other two have been forgotten alongside the swollen ranks of other newcomers like me.

http://www.fileize.com/view/84c47eeb-44b/ - No V-Cam

http://www.fileize.com/view/31290ab3-c2e/ - With V-Cam

This time, I used a 24 FPS on my animation. Would love some tips on how to smoothen the edges of my sticks when I'm using a V-Cam.
Finally got the trick on how to apply force, albeit at a choppy way. Again, tips :o.
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Jan 22, 2013 6:31 PM #859046
Quote from Jameslyle2
Second animation posted on this site:
http://www.fileize.com/view/f4e45302-3c7/

Would love some tips especially on Reaction and how force can be better applied. Used a V-cam on this and found out that it distorts(don't really know) the edges of my sticks.

This time, I used a 16 FPS instead of 13 FPS like last time. Criticism and as I said, tips would be nice.


Your animation is good no doubt. i am no pro so accept my advice or not it is up to you.
after the first punch there needs to be a bit more recoil leading to the second punch. overall great job
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