Another animation I made today. Just some black stickman punching a red stickman :P

Le anim: http://www.fileize.com/view/e734acd6-b49/

Critic ME! :D

Sorry. Im new here. So. I don't know.

http://www.fileize.com/view/42686195-686/

CnC

http://filz.us/wVX

i am well aware i am bad... any tips?

http://www.fileize.com/view/114e6bdd-af0/

...Critic me! :)

well this is my first try, hope it's good cause I worked on it for a week O.O, here I go
http://www.fileize.com/view/3b31f4e5-0ae/ (sorry for the no head :) )

Criticize: i'm not new to the forums, I have an RHG

Quote from Stickly

tomokaito. don't triple post.

Report it pls.
Kthnx

http://www.fileize.com/view/35e3f46d-fb5/

Criticize my animation to help me Improve! :D

Quote from DigitalFlamer105

http://www.fileize.com/view/35e3f46d-fb5/

Criticize my animation to help me Improve! :D

Nice job, I like it! Pretty smooth and powerful. The only problems is the lack of realisticness/footplacement. For instane the first punch, he stretched his torso out way too much past his legs/centre of gravity. To fix it, you should of spread the front leg out more, keeping him more balanced. The second punch was powerful but the physics were off, his whole body would of moved a lot more then that, E.G: Springing his legs up to jump high instead of keeping them straight and stiff.
So yeah, main complaint is just something most beginners have trouble with, making the movements believable. They don't necessarily have to be realistic, but believable enough to look somewhat human-like, otherwise it just defies the laws of... well... quality animation :P

Keep it up, I reckon you'll improve fast.

http://www.fileize.com/files/cc7ac1c7/1d8/ShowDown.swf

I've been working it out. Need a little help on making more smooth animations.
So far.. How's it??

here's my first stick figure fighting animation http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=xd8NJZBgyvA please CnC

http://www.fileize.com/view/114e6bdd-af0/

http://www.fileize.com/view/f795cad6-e7c/

Just two animations of a Simple Combo...Criticize me to help me Improve! :D

Edit:

http://www.fileize.com/view/2a58a2ac-cb9/

First attempt at doing a punch crack thing....Criticize me! :D

hello, im new to animating so ifigured that i'd start with basics :
first runn :
http://www.fileize.com/view/1884a57f-6e4/

Quote from DigitalFlamer105

http://www.fileize.com/view/114e6bdd-af0/

http://www.fileize.com/view/f795cad6-e7c/

Just two animations of a Simple Combo...Criticize me to help me Improve! :D

Edit:

http://www.fileize.com/view/2a58a2ac-cb9/

First attempt at doing a punch crack thing....Criticize me! :D

you have to work on your foot placement and the realism ..
try to learn from this vid : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs&list=PL94164AE5777D03B8

and the punch crack thing : you have to add more power to it, like making the screen shake a bit and maybe a little more cracks in the ground .. and the landing of the stick was unrealistic . other than that you're making a good progress .

Quote from Dash

http://www.fileize.com/files/cc7ac1c7/1d8/ShowDown.swf

I've been working it out. Need a little help on making more smooth animations.
So far.. How's it??

It's kinda nice when I finished it. Really looks nice, But needs V-cam and SFX. :)