Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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metalxghost

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Apr 23, 2007 5:25 PM #30730
It was basically a rough draft of what I was working on.
And that's a bit messed up...
I guess that wasn't the newest exported movie I had made.
The newer movie showed the sticks teleporting into the arena.

I tried out a little Megaman entrance style for the other sticks.
Y'know, the line comes down from the ceiling....
Maybe you could teach me some special effects Cmki?
I didn't even like the beginning one myself, I do better smoke explosion type things....
symbiote

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Apr 27, 2007 2:41 AM #30966
swfupload.com/view/116879.htm
be gentle...
metalxghost

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Apr 27, 2007 11:50 AM #30982
1.) Brush tool is what it seemed you used. Line tool is much better for beginners.
2.) Sticks seemed to have gotten smaller through the animation.
3.) With that amount of blood, it looked like you made it splatter then disappear when it should have just stayed.

If it was longer, I might have said something about the smoothness. It looked decent as long as it was. Might want to make it a bit longer.
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Apr 27, 2007 4:06 PM #30993
Quote from symbiote
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be gentle...


not that good


























... really
symbiote

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Apr 27, 2007 7:24 PM #31006
Quote from metalxghost
1.) Brush tool is what it seemed you used. Line tool is much better for beginners.
2.) Sticks seemed to have gotten smaller through the animation.
3.) With that amount of blood, it looked like you made it splatter then disappear when it should have just stayed.

If it was longer, I might have said something about the smoothness. It looked decent as long as it was. Might want to make it a bit longer.


aight, thanks man
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Apr 27, 2007 8:19 PM #31009
Here are two of my newest animations...(neither of them finished):o

This was probably for some competition...
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109134.htm

And this one was just to try out the lightsaber effect.
http://www.swfupload.com/view/112393.htm

I might make the second longer if you guys like it. Plus I wanted
some names for the characters in the second.:)
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Apr 27, 2007 8:31 PM #31010
I just wanted to ask here if this animation vs. animator(stick vs. cursor comp) looked realistic so far:

Very unfinished
This is very unfinished (only 103 frames lol) and it is kind of slow(12fps), but all I want to know is if it looked like someone drawing a stickfigure?
aniguy92

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Apr 28, 2007 4:12 AM #31031
My First Two Attempts With Flash:
(just got it two days ago)
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r225/soccerboy92/secondattempt.swf?t=1177735534

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r225/soccerboy92/walktest.swf?t=1177735617
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Apr 28, 2007 4:50 AM #31032
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two words:

line tool
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Apr 28, 2007 4:54 AM #31033
but i like the "doodle look"
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Apr 28, 2007 6:05 AM #31038
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but i like the "doodle look"


ya, that actually is a good style if you get good with it.

so stick with it.
cjip

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Apr 28, 2007 6:52 AM #31048
Quote from mesmay
Here are two of my newest animations...(neither of them finished):o

This was probably for some competition...
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109134.htm

And this one was just to try out the lightsaber effect.
http://www.swfupload.com/view/112393.htm

I might make the second longer if you guys like it. Plus I wanted
some names for the characters in the second.:)


I like how you use the blur in the first one, and for #2, I like the characters....
You brushed better in the second
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Apr 28, 2007 12:36 PM #31075
This is my first attempt at brush:
http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=9210

lol, it was SUPPOSED to be a running loop, but I got bored and decided to break the monotony of it by cutting him in half! :D
didnt put much effort into the blood because it was mostly just a focus on the brush stick.
metalxghost

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Apr 28, 2007 5:37 PM #31106
@Mesmay: Not bad, fairly smooth. I'm not one for much of using the brush tool except for effects. But I think you did pretty cool.

@Cmki: That's fairly good so far. I s'pose the next step in that animation would be a copy and past of his arm? Fairly smooth as well.

@AniGuy: Egh... Line tool please. You did a fairly good walking test but the other animation just wasn't as good. He should have been travelling a bit faster in some spots.
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Apr 29, 2007 6:00 AM #31225
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@Mesmay: Not bad, fairly smooth. I'm not one for much of using the brush tool except for effects. But I think you did pretty cool.

@Cmki: That's fairly good so far. I s'pose the next step in that animation would be a copy and past of his arm? Fairly smooth as well.

@AniGuy: Egh... Line tool please. You did a fairly good walking test but the other animation just wasn't as good. He should have been travelling a bit faster in some spots.


I know...It was like my very first one....still gettn used to it...trying to get better