@philosopher.
You have improved, that was quite nice although the text was a little distracing in that place. Maybe move it to the middle?

@*jynx*. The rubbish bin one was odd, the stick should of been at the bottom of the hill as then it would of looked better but it was ok. Remember physics in your next animation, in the unfinished one the throw had no power behind it. It needs a follow throw as well as a build up, but there isn't much to comment on. Yo are improving though.

Both Philosopher and *Jynx*, keep up the good work.
Philosopher, you have great potential.
Jynx is on his way too, work on physics.

Yeah, post in the general help section if you want to know how to post your animation.

You guys are getting better. :D

Hello, I`m new at this forum and im doing 2 weeks flash now. And here is my first little project. Sorry i was to lazy to find / add sounds :P

http://www.swfup.com/file/11101

That was good, you just need to work on the teleport.

I like it, keep it up.

This is my first time ever touching flash, so be gentle. =P

swfup/file/11133

Between the swfup and /file, please put the .come (Without the e)

Space is there so I could post the link.

It's only two deaths, and I plan on making around 15 deaths. The reason I posted it so unfinished is so I could get some (alot) tips to make it better.

Wow, that is really nice to be your first animation!

Thanks, sorry for 'breaking the rules'. (Sort of posting a link in a deformed way.) I hope I don't get slaughtered for it. O.o I just can't get 20 posts that quickly, I belong, and try to stay active, in 4 other forums.

Anyway, any tips on what to add, remove, or fix?

No, many people post links.

my super duper unawesome dumb goofy unfunny flash

http://www.stickpageportal.com/watch...film-ever.html

Link doesn't work.

Or it doesn't work to watch the movie.

my first dont laugh.i do not have a tablet. no tablet anim

This is my first FBF animation

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa175/stickslaughter/Firstbrushanimation.swf

well thats not bad, but work on running and make sure his back doesnt stay stiff