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Teh H4x3r

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Jul 10, 2007 11:12 PM #44177
This is the animation i made using flash. (made in 5 minutes). Its my first animation. Ever.
www.swfup.com/file/15488 lol i got around the 20 post thing :P Its a running thing to test out flash. What should i improve on it?
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Jul 10, 2007 11:18 PM #44178
well its bassicly your first animation but it isent cause its only 1 sec .so its a [SIZE="5"]little [/SIZE] short to be calt an animation but so I cant say what you need to inprove???? cause I dont really see anything well if this is really your first it good cause the stick looked cool and nice [SIZE="5"]1 sec[/SIZE]animation dude tumb up!
Teh H4x3r

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Jul 10, 2007 11:19 PM #44179
Err... Thanks? its just me trying to animate running.
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Jul 10, 2007 11:21 PM #44180
Quote from ssjbryando
well its bassicly your first animation but it isent cause its only 1 sec .so its a [SIZE="5"]little [/SIZE] short to be calt an animation but so I cant say what you need to inprove???? cause I dont really see anything well if this is really your first it good cause the stick looked cool and nice [SIZE="5"]1 sec[/SIZE]animation dude tumb up!


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Jul 10, 2007 11:21 PM #44181
Damn that's good for a first animation!

I say the only 2 things you need to work on:
1.) Upper Body Motion - During the animation, the head seemed to be moving backwards with the upper body, like being pulled along
2.) More frames - Putting more frames and using a higher fps in there would really speed it up.

Damn...I gotta give you props. I didn't even know how to make outlines on my first animation. Sweet job.
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Jul 10, 2007 11:27 PM #44187
lol thx metal for the translation..

yeah it sure is good...if you only now flash for 5 mini you cant possible now all that

1 know how to draw outlines

2 draw a decent looking stick

3 to motion tween that good....
Teh H4x3r

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Jul 10, 2007 11:31 PM #44190
1. Metal didnt translate, He made fun of your spelling / english. :P and its thumbs up.
2. I didnt say i didnt read the SPP tutorials :P
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Jul 10, 2007 11:31 PM #44191
Quote from ssjbryando
lol thx metal for the translation..

yeah it sure is good...if you only now flash for 5 mini you cant possible now all that

1 know how to draw outlines

2 draw a decent looking stick

3 to motion tween that good....


1. I learned how to do that in 30 seconds.

2. What the hell. Sticks are easy to ****ing draw.

3. Who said it was tweened?
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Jul 10, 2007 11:33 PM #44195
Quote from Archangel
1. I learned how to do that in 30 seconds.

2. What the hell. Sticks are easy to ****ing draw.

3. Who said it was tweened?


if learned that to in 30 sec...while your mentioning it......:D well good work whatever :Love<3:
Teh H4x3r

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Jul 10, 2007 11:34 PM #44196
Lol, it wasnt tweened. Tweening is for pussies (if its useless at the time).


^^archangel(i think)
Your right, all of it is easy.
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Jul 10, 2007 11:40 PM #44198
good to hear that you think that IM not tweening eather :D :Undercover:
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Jul 11, 2007 12:18 AM #44208
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lol

nice animation man you should probly make the movement alittle faster
Teh H4x3r

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Jul 11, 2007 12:34 AM #44211
I really need someone to tell me how to make it look like it has more force... anyway here it is:
swfup.com/file/15495/
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Jul 11, 2007 9:52 AM #44286
http://www.swfup.com/file/15495 linked
Um the arm comes up around to far and the leg twitches backwards after the punch which make it look really weak. Nice try though, you also might want to avoid the blur until you have got the basics nailed.
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Jul 11, 2007 1:45 PM #44309
Is there any particle tut..?I mean smoke,and shadows..
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