My 2nd flash =D
View my swf file!

hope ya like it

Quote from Schwa

That was funny, I loved the rake thing. You have a good sense of humor, you just need to practice your animations-- (Your obviously not hopeless soo...seek the light! [and the light would be tutorials and practice]). What fps are you using? 18-24 is good for stick animations. Your blood needs work..its too straight and not liquidy enough 0.0. You need to work on making your animations more fluid and put more effort into your effects, (the speed lines, blood) they can make or break an animation.

Like I said before, I like your sense of your humor and I can't wait for you to see some stuff you pop out later on after you practice a bit. I'm not a pro..but I'm practicing like a wild beast-- Wow...that was lame--:Happy:

Thanks, but the problem is tutorials don't help me too much. Whenever I use a tutorial and everything they say I do it like 10-15 times but it always comes out bad...But Ya ill do some tutorials, and a new animation

Meh I just suggested tutorials because thats what everyone else does, the only tutorials I looked at were blood, and I don't follow those anyways--

And to the other guy who posted his flash I can't view it so I can't comment on it.

Pelvic thrust of doom, eh? I guess that's one way to put it. I've revised my double punch, and attempted to put more movement into the knees, and less in the pelvis. Tell me what you all think.

Meh-- The arms look loads better but it still doesn't seem like it has more power...but of course, a double punch can't really have that much power anyways sooooo...

Good Job :Happy:

Thanks Schwa :Smile:

I didn't really intend it to be powerful, simply a quick attack. I'll try posting some attacks with more power whenever I get to it.

Quote from Panda Lord

Thanks Schwa :Smile:

I didn't really intend it to be powerful, simply a quick attack. I'll try posting some attacks with more power whenever I get to it.

If you want it too look more power add leg movement and have him pull his arms back alot

Ok well I attempted a run(he has a head legs body but no arms...No arms cause It looks like there twitching really fast)

swfup
.com/file/16105

http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=demonandhislightbg9.swf

my 3rd animation

The animation was choppy and the effects need to be longer than one frame. Add more frames to all the movements/effects. Maybe use an explosion for teleporting instead of speed lines. Check out the tutorial section for some effects.

okay i will make the effects longer and etc

swfup.com/file/16194

I have yet to reach my 20th post... so please copy and paste...
Please give me some criticism.

Quote from PaperGodzilla

swfup.com/file/16194

I have yet to reach my 20th post... so please copy and paste...
Please give me some criticism.

I just wanna say if you put www. before the link then it actualy becomes a clicking url!! so just put www. infront of it and we can click TO ALL OF YOU! :Smile: wait do you need 20 post to make a link? lol I got 227 posts in 2 weeks..no im not spamming

My animations:

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/sipertest.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/shootingtestplus2dode.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/monsterdoetbeam.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/explosietest.swf

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My animations:

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/sipertest.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/shootingtestplus2dode.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/monsterdoetbeam.swf

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u191/1wilco12/explosietest.swf

The stick in the sipertest.swf was badly drawn and the blood was horrible.

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The guy with the gun like thing in the shootingtestplus2dode.swf was basically still, don't you think after firing a gun you'd get some at least a bit of recoil forcing your arms back? and again the blood was horrible, try to make pools not dots of blood. another thing, the boom, or explosion from the gun was also bad, try to fix some of this stuff don't rush it, quality not quantity.

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This site is for stick animations not animations of some blob shooting a lazer er something.

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The fire coming from the tail of that thing was bad, the explosion was horrible, take some tutorials, also think about how it would really happen, blood doesn't form little spots on the groud, it spreads out to a thin pool