Draco, I can't really comment on your anim, as the particles and things are well out of my league.

Godzilla, in yours, the black stickman had a weird pause right before making his first kick. I can't really describe it. Also, I thought he looked silly when he fired his blue flame thing. I think the reason is obvious. :heh:

Anyways, here is my latest update on the rapier anim. Tell me what yall think.

http://server3.pictiger.com/img/1164632/-incomplete-experimental-rapier-man-stabbing-other-man-v-3--swf.swf

Also, congrats on your 20th post, Godzilla!

First, I think the wielder of the rapier should step forward and lunge instead of just leaning. Second... what is that thing in the middle?

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Also, congrats on your 20th post, Godzilla!

Thank you:Happy:

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First, I think the wielder of the rapier should step forward and lunge instead of just leaning. Second... what is that thing in the middle?

I'm guessing the thing in the middle is a layer that I had hidden while I was animating, so I forgot of its existence. It made me jump when I saw it. And also, I tried making him step forward, but it just didn't look right. I'll try again.

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Thank you:Happy:

You're very welcome. :Smile:

EDIT: Here is the rapier anim, with the changes Godzilla suggested. Enjoy.

http://server5.pictiger.com/img/1214958/-incomplete-experimental-rapier-man-stabbing-other-man-v-4--swf.swf

Please don't post the same animation like 5 times before you are finished with it. Add a head and another arm and post it.

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Please don't post the same animation like 5 times before you are finished with it. Add a head and another arm and post it.

I am sorry, Freddeh. I will remember to restrain these primal instincts when I post future anims.

Now, onto my latest work! The rapier anim is complete! I decided not to add blood, as I think I need to get better at creating it first. Here it is, tell me what you all think.

http://server3.pictiger.com/img/1170257/-complete-rapier-man-stabbing-other-man-v-7--swf.swf

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I am sorry, Freddeh. I will remember to restrain these primal instincts when I post future anims.

Now, onto my latest work! The rapier anim is complete! I decided not to add blood, as I think I need to get better at creating it first. Here it is, tell me what you all think.

http://server3.pictiger.com/img/1170257/-complete-rapier-man-stabbing-other-man-v-7--swf.swf

nice animation

anyway... here is mine:

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-18233.swf

I made it by assholes tutorial

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?p=964771#post964771

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Now, onto my latest work! The rapier anim is complete! I decided not to add blood, as I think I need to get better at creating it first. Here it is, tell me what you all think.

http://server3.pictiger.com/img/1170257/-complete-rapier-man-stabbing-other-man-v-7--swf.swf

I liked it except for the mouth... it was a little weird. Maybe try to zoom and use brush or something instead of line.

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anyway... here is mine:

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-18233.swf

That wasn't a stick animation (although I guess it doesn't have to be)... and it was... headachey.

lulz stoner-vision.

is the ruler tool the main thing to keeping stick the same size?

well...here is my first time using the line tool...i rtied runninghttp://www.swfup.com/file/18660

That run was O.K, Xoptikx. The leg and arm movements were good. However, there was no head or back movement. The head needs to bob when he is running, and the back needs to bend.

Yes, the head and back were too stiff. Keep practicing.

um.this like my verry first one.http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb112/jojo4151/moviefinished.swf

@jojo4151: It's a start. You need to work on your smoothness. More frames, less movement per frame. Start there. Keep practicing.

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um.this like my verry first one.

This is good i think but you need to make it flow more. Also when he is in the air he would bob up and dow or drop because of gravity not just go straight off.