In a bloodthirsty stupor, I have made this anim. I think it's pretty awesome myself. A stickman falls from above, and onto a spiky rock. Please comment on his "circumstances" afterwards. Do you guys think it looks realistic? Please, zoom in to better see his "circumstances". :Smile:

http://www.swfupload.com/view/123347.htm

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In a bloodthirsty stupor, I have made this anim. I think it's pretty awesome myself. A stickman falls from above, and onto a spiky rock. Please comment on his "circumstances" afterwards. Do you guys think it looks realistic? Please, zoom in to better see his "circumstances". :Smile:

http://www.swfupload.com/view/123347.htm

it doesnt look to realistic first of all you skipped many frames, you should have animated it falling... as i see it you animated it on the part he hit his head on the rock... second it's choppy, the stick was drawn badly... the blood wasnt good.

dont worry you there's a lot of time to improve.. practice some more read tuts

Here's another violent animation. I am trying to get better at blood. Also, this is my first animation with gun usage in it.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/101809.htm

Well.. heres my third animation with flash so far
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-20109.swf
i got a little help from Raffi Stick :Oh No!:

( the face is just for fun, dont mind the face, LOL )
EDIT : Yes i know the Play button doesnt work and flashes there at the begining/end

@Panda Lord-the guy who got shot shrinks while being blown back, which is physically impossible (being blown back is what im talkin about)

[SWF="http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-20110.swf"]Width=250=250[/swf]


The first animtion i've posted tell me what you think

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Here's another violent animation. I am trying to get better at blood. Also, this is my first animation with gun usage in it.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/101809.htm

The physics is all wrong dude, and the guy who got shot shrunk..



@kayzer well it's still choppy but it's getting better

rebellion214 what flash and is it the full version?

When you say the physics are bad, do you mean the way the victim reacted to the bullet? Well, I tried to change it, do you think it looks better? I'd also like to hear some comments on the blood, if you guys don't mind.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/117463.htm

Dang, his back is still elevated a little. I'll fix that in the next version.

@mr.mcstick,what do you mean what flash? could you be more specific?

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When you say the physics are bad, do you mean the way the victim reacted to the bullet? Well, I tried to change it, do you think it looks better? I'd also like to hear some comments on the blood, if you guys don't mind.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/117463.htm

Dang, his back is still elevated a little. I'll fix that in the next version.

better than the other, what i meant with the wrong physics is that the body was the first to land on the ground before the head.. well in fact the guy was shot in the head so the tendency is that the guy will land head first.

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better than the other, what i meant with the wrong physics is that the body was the first to land on the ground before the head.. well in fact the guy was shot in the head so the tendency is that the guy will land head first.

I concur. You should have the head snap back, have him pause for a moment, then have him fall back. I think that you made the blood turn into a circular particle too early. Also, most of the blood would come back out from the bullet hole (in this case, to the right). However, I suck at blood so you should probably wait for another person to comment about it...

Thanks for the crits, both of you. I'll see what I can do to make it better. :Smile:

Well, here is the next version. I made the head bend back more, so it hits the ground first. I also added MORE BLOOD!!! I'm trying hard to get better at it. The extra blood took me several hours to make.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/109153.htm

sweet...the blood looks good but the guy shooting the gun has his foot come off the ground a little after he fires.....through it all i liked it

i dont like how the blood goes in two directions but the drawing of the blood looks good.

Sweet stick's,who will link me the lesson where is showed how to make this kind of stick's ?
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Sry 4 my english..