Quote from honk

hi,
this is my first flash ani. what do you think?

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/Firstflash2.swf

What was the framerate?

That is pretty good, Honk. I don't know how you could improve on it.

Also, my avatar strikes again!! I have added a background this time, as well as a certain... source... for the writing. I have also made the changes suggested by others. I lowered the feather to the base of the hat, and also changed the way the arm reacts to the gunfire. Take a look!

EDIT: Hmm. If you look closely at my avatar, you can see a white box near the corpse's hand. I have no idea how it got there, or how to get rid of it.

I know how to get rid of the box, open a new document, copy all the frames from the avatar one, and past them in the new one, export it, and the white square is done. My avatar is better, though. XD

Quote from honk

hi,
this is my first flash ani. what do you think?

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r297/EmiR_2007/Firstflash2.swf

I'm assuming you have experience with another program. Even so, it was quite good for a first. Good job! :Spiderman: (I just like Spider-Man)

EDIT: I also just realized that was your 100th post. I just thought everyone should know...
EDIT2: I like your avatar (both of you). Panda Lord, is the guy's arm moving in the end to show that he wrote it? If so, he should have his arm up in the beginning, and it should smear the blood down as the main guy shoots the shots to make it more clear.

thanks to all.
its 12fps.
paper, yes i use easytoon for a longer time, and have some experience.
thanks again for comment.

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My first flash![/QUOTE]

imo its good. i lol'd on the "ball-action". the moves are good and the walk too, but the jumping and the physic could be improved.

My first fullbody, made at 1 a.m., and it is my first. I think it is pretty bad. http://www.swfup.com/file/21686

Thats full body? It changes shape every frame, head does not stay curved, feet are uneven, Ugh this list can go on forever.

I know, I was tired, and couldn't control my mouse. I'll take it away.

No put it back, get some real C&C.

Fine, I did, and get that smiley out of your signature, it is annoying. No offence.

I dont care it stays.

<----What do u think about it ?

im makin a flash but its a first for me

Quote from dracomasta13

im makin a flash but its a first for me

well, were is it?!