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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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king kev

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Sep 23, 2007 12:40 AM #59769
here is my second walk test, plz rate
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Sep 23, 2007 12:50 AM #59770
Quote from king kev
here is my second walk test, plz rate
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That was horrible. Look at some walking tutorials.
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Hello this is one of my first animations please rate and give comments!

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9862/testpunchwhituziatendhz2.gif


Good for a first animation. Just look at a tutorial on the basics and work your way up from there once you have mastered the basics.
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Sep 23, 2007 3:39 AM #59775
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6843/pokehr6.gif how do you like it?see,i was good and posted in begginers section,and now i want a cookie.
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Sep 23, 2007 4:20 AM #59781
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dude, do not rate animations. All the animations you just rated are low beginner and no where near med beginner. Terix's was the best if you count the last 2 pages


ty for the advice, but it was just my opinion, i'll stick with suggestions I guess.
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Sep 23, 2007 4:20 AM #59782
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http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6843/pokehr6.gif how do you like it?see,i was good and posted in begginers section,and now i want a cookie.


A little shakey on the jump. Not much to rate though.
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Sep 23, 2007 4:36 AM #59784
http://Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us[/IMG]

well i'm a super noob at animation and all this excuse me if i am wrong.
i probly put this on wrong......
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Sep 23, 2007 9:59 AM #59795
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http://Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us[/IMG]

well i'm a super noob at animation and all this excuse me if i am wrong.
i probly put this on wrong......


Step 1:
Save your .piv into .gif
Uncheck merge
Set frame delay to 6~7 for normal frame rate.
Shrink the frames by 1/2 or it will be too big.

Step 2:
Go to either www.imageshack.us ,www.pivothost.org , or www.filecram.com
I recommend one of them.
Upload your work there.
If you choose imageshack, I'd recommend you download the toolbar, so it's easier and faster to upload.

Step 3:
For Pivothost you should see a link already, copy and paste it here for the URL
For Imageshack you should see a heck lot of links in there with a first-frame-pic of your animation.
Scroll down the page till you see a link labeled with "Direct link". Copy it, and paste it here, it's your URL.
If you want to post it into image form, which you will need when you don't have 20 posts yet..
Type in Image
For Filecram just copy the Second code(BB link) for the direct link, First link HTML code for download.

There , you're done, Hope this helped.
Credz to Cezar for the Filecram add-on.
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omegadoom

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Sep 23, 2007 10:04 AM #59797
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

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Sep 23, 2007 12:17 PM #59812
wat did you think of my animation
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Sep 23, 2007 1:51 PM #59819
lol yours is ok wot do ya think of mine?????????????????????????????????
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Sep 23, 2007 2:46 PM #59825
it's good lots of blood
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Sep 23, 2007 3:09 PM #59830
Quote from omegadoom
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

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Overall I think it's pretty good I guess, but the only problem is that the stickman's leg didn't really move at all, move the legs, and ease, then the animation would be excellent. =)
Keep going!
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Sep 23, 2007 3:21 PM #59833
Quote from omegadoom
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

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VERY stiff. Bad movements. blood was good for a beginner, but why did the blood just stop when it hit the ground? there was no easing at all. When the arms fell it just stopped on the ground, no bounce or anything.

Low beginner.
Asylum

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Sep 23, 2007 5:28 PM #59891
OmegaDoom,

I think it's pretty good but I don't like how he tosses his arm, it should've fallen off a little bit earlier. I also don't like how the leg was stiff, I think the spine movments were decent and the arms were pretty good, I'm not certain it that was the best way his first arm could've fallen but it was pretty good and I like the blood.



And burningpride, you don't use HTML you use IMG tags.
omegadoom

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Sep 23, 2007 5:48 PM #59903
thank you all for the advice, check this out (ignore the lightning thingy it sucks)Image
thanx
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