Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Nov 7, 2007 7:35 PM #67057
name some of the really bad stuff
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Nov 7, 2007 7:42 PM #67059
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it's low beginner. Work on everything.

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Nov 7, 2007 7:45 PM #67060
can you be more pasific and give me some help
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Nov 7, 2007 7:53 PM #67062
The first one is too fast, and the others are okay, but you almost med beg i would say.
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Nov 7, 2007 7:53 PM #67063
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my throwing test is it good?

C&C and rank plz
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Nov 7, 2007 7:54 PM #67064
You have the ball go from his hand when it is at the top, not at the end, otherwise it'll look like he slammed it on something.
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Nov 7, 2007 7:54 PM #67065
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can you be more pasific and give me some help

how can I be more specific? Everything! Every frame is messed up and low beginner.
The only help I'm giving you: Image
That's what a punch, etc, should look like -_-

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Don't post stupid shit that you didn't even try on.

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my throwing test is it good?

C&C and rank plz
It's stiff, needs easing, and has bad movements. Keep working.
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Nov 7, 2007 7:55 PM #67066
And the ball flies to straight
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Nov 7, 2007 7:56 PM #67067
It should move downward.

I finish unfinished posts.
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Nov 7, 2007 7:59 PM #67068
I dont see any stiffness? O-o or choppyness and it is easing the ball is
-..-.....-.....-....-....- - -
thous - mark where the ball is IT WAS EASING
jeez u dont no easing when u see it :Sweating:
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Nov 7, 2007 8:00 PM #67069
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I need to know which is worse so I can enter it here:
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=73500

For the "Worst Animation That Makes No Sense" Comp.
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Nov 7, 2007 8:00 PM #67070
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how can I be more specific? Everything! Every frame is messed up and low beginner.
The only help I'm giving you: Image
That's what a punch, etc, should look like -_-

Don't post stupid shit that you didn't even try on.

It's stiff, needs easing, and has bad movements. Keep working.


can you give me the piv so i can look at the punch
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Nov 7, 2007 8:45 PM #67073
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I dont see any stiffness? O-o or choppyness and it is easing the ball is
-..-.....-.....-....-....- - -
thous - mark where the ball is IT WAS EASING
jeez u dont no easing when u see it :Sweating:
the whole animation was choppy and stiff. And that's not easing. So you're the one who doesn't know easing when you see it.

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can you give me the piv so i can look at the punch
no, you can see it just fine with the .gif.
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Nov 7, 2007 9:00 PM #67074
it's to fast for me, can you make a quick punch and give me the piv please
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Nov 7, 2007 9:25 PM #67075
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it's to fast for me, can you make a quick punch and give me the piv please
no, I cannot. Just think how someone looks when he punches -_-