A bad run and a jump not really much to crit...

Thanks for letting me know what is wrong with it. I'll get to work adding on so people don't get ticked off at me for tossing in my two cents every 20 frames...

What's wrong with his run? Does he need to lean more into it, or are his arms too unresponsive? Is it both? Just tell me that and I'll finish this animation.

Arms,and it looks like he has 1 leg broken,you should look at some tuts and try doing the exact thing

I'M BACK AND WITH A VENGEANCE! ;-;
lol, jk
Anyway is this any smoother?

not really smooth just like not as choppy as id expect from joo....

@ CursedWaters: I don't really see a point in jumping, he can reach it easily. =/

Punch Test:


http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtest2bu7.gif

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Punch Test:


http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtest2bu7.gif

I didn't like how his arm jerked after the punch, but anyway, it's good.

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@ CursedWaters: I don't really see a point in jumping, he can reach it easily. =/

Good point .

my impact test, plz C&C the impact and NOT HOW HE FALLS, i was only aiming for the impact...

My uppercut http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=upcea5.gif
@sacred it was good...But the fall...

Can any 1 give me some pointers on my animation i dont realy like the beam and any idears on wat to do next with it ?????

oh and i know the bench look bad when it falls ill fix dat later!

good that you posted it here but why did you also make a thread about it?
anyway well you shouldnt yet make such long anis you need to improove you skill cuz that was realy , choppy stiff , the text needs to stay for a longer while cuz its hard to read it. mostly on work on everything check tutorials too and good luck

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1026/awesomespritemovieyp9.gif my first sprite movie short bu i think good

Here is a gun test that I made.


http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2034/gunntestfd2.gif


EDIT:http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunntestfd2.gif