pie, try to move more limbs and add more movement. example before they headbutt, they just stay in the air, maybe make them start falling then they headbutt. Aswel the swords just appear, maybe try make them draw the swords. keep practising tho!

edit: also when you post it make sure you half the size of the file or make it a third the size, when you save as gif, select "shrink frames by" (1/1 change it to 1/2 or 1/3) :)

my latest anim c&c

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here is my bow animatio.i made the bow, arrow, arrow case, and ramp by myself. well,yway, here it is:

That was cool.
But wtf was that blue thing?:confused:

ye that bow one is done quite well

just made this i do quite like it but i know i could have made alot of things better..like the punch and kick impact and make them not so fast..anyhow here it is

Well it's hard to make them draw their swords right away becuz then over half of it gets chopped off where they are usually.

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ye that bow one is done quite well

just made this i do quite like it but i know i could have made alot of things better..like the punch and kick impact and make them not so fast..anyhow here it is

you messed up on your blast,animate it and if you are going to do damage make it where the screen flashes a bright color,wind blows,addd another charecter in front of those close to the light so it looks like their body is lighted up instead of dark

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you messed up on your blast,animate it and if you are going to do damage make it where the screen flashes a bright color,wind blows,addd another charecter in front of those close to the light so it looks like their body is lighted up instead of dark

is there anyway u can giv me a clip of wht u mean by add another char infront of those...do u just mean add bits of a lighter shade so it looks like the lights reflecting on them? also when i edit a beam it would take way to long, as im just making these to get more used to the program. Or is there a faster way of editing cos ill need to delete each part of the beam, unless i just change the colour. I duno personaly i like the bright light that comes from it..i kno wht u mean by add bright colours as i did it in my first animation. Thnx 4 tips

in a minute k?I'm a bit busy

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in a minute k?I'm a bit busy

k lol cheers, goin bed 15 mins =p

no.5 minutes.It's not as good as I could've done

ah i see what u mean...btw..is the beam itself on mine wrong orrr is it the colour, cos i dnt like the colour but i duno wht u thought was bad bout it.

it looks like the whole beam itself is 3-4 figures.It should be 9-20.
and when I say the beam needs to be more animating i'm talking about it like this

(43 figure types)

edit:wrong amount.I'm thinking of my other one

My Pivot always messes up when I try and save stuff usually so I get really far and it says a bunch of crap and Ican't save cuz it's unresaponsive. :(

what type of stuff does it say?

lol added a few things 2 beam, still aint all that but u kno bit better then it was,



now goodnight thank you for your time n help tbs :P cya 2moz :D