I made a sprite animation do you think it's beginner

What do ya think of my intro to the colab with
Twisted Symphony here? The guy got raped by the .gif, he should be dark gray

btw the only reason i'm posting here in the beginners section is cause i don't wanna waste space in the open thread

Jah-Jah, Downloading sprites and making an anim can't show us if your beginner or not, make another and we'll see

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Nice

I'd say borderline inter, but the only problems are minor stiff parts for short amounts of time, but otherwise, make longer anims and you might be inter

So lol hows mine ^^^ It's my colab intro with TS

It's pretty nice.
But I feel like it's kinda.. Trembling..
Ehh.. Question : Is there a double framing ? Or my internet did that ?

PS. : If there are errors, then sry for my english, ya know I'm not so good at it.. I'm only 12.

Yeah, it was double framing, just to build suspense at the beginning
Hopefully TS will get back on soon to do his part, lol he left right when i finished 16 hours ago and hasn't been back >_>

My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet :Embarrassed:. Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?

lol i couldn't do any better :)!

people w8 until i have 20 posts!!!

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My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet :Embarrassed:. Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?

Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif

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Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif

Ok his wasn't that good, it's in the beginner section for god's sake

and for joo

VERY stiff uneased and choppy
it's tut time, hit up darkdemon.org's pivot tutorial master list and stare at it for a few weeks until it soaks in

NOW TAI MAI SHU

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Ok his wasn't that good, it's in the beginner section for god's sake

and for joo

VERY stiff uneased and choppy
it's tut time, hit up darkdemon.org's pivot tutorial master list and stare at it for a few weeks until it soaks in

NOW TAI MAI SHU

I was saying wow cause it was his second stick animation and you have to admit it wasnt THAT bad...also mine stinks cause im a beginner too lol XD

Is it beginner?

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Is it beginner?

Yes. The walk was crap, the stick figures were too stiff, the one on the right never moved at all, the guy's fall was weird, and he disappeared. An animation doesn't have to be a clean loop.

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Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif

Uh, no offense, I realize you're a beginner, but it sucked. Why?



1. Stiff, uneased, choppy, unfluid. Move everyone at the same time, and do it slowly.



2. The title was too short, and you shouldn't have had one at all, really. One frame is barely anything.



3. The bullets were already there. Make them come out of the guns and move quickly towards wherever they were shot at.



4. Read some tutorials. DarkDemon.org, as said, has some good ones.

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My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet . Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?

Nice hatred of the Chinese. But yeah, it's good, especially for a second animation. The sword is really nice, and you pulled off the camera really well. Just work on your explosions. =P

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Nice hatred of the Chinese. But yeah, it's good, especially for a second animation. The sword is really nice, and you pulled off the camera really well. Just work on your explosions. =P

Arrite, I didn't know what other stks to use because I was too lazy to choose, so I randomly picked one :P
IM NOT RACIST :Nooooooo: AZN's my kind :P (i'm Jap and Flip)