Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Jun 22, 2008 11:18 PM #163554
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Yeah, but no one replied to it.

Thanks. I have to get it better to get my own threads though, right?


Yeah, or make it longer.

BTW guys, here's another Text/Walk/Beam/ and a cinematic-ish test. I used Lixu's advice for the Text and Beam. "thx"
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Yeah I know, I messed up on the kick. The 2nd flashy part is supposed to be when he breaks his arm by bending it the WRONG way, lol.

Comment please.
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EDIT: Prankster, nice-ish walk, it's pretty good for a first anim, but it's choppy. Make the clip bigger and work on easing the anims. xD
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Jun 23, 2008 2:59 AM #163740
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Oh god, I hate this one :/

Anyway, should I continue?

C&C pl0x
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Jun 23, 2008 3:17 AM #163769
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Oh god, I hate this one :/

Anyway, should I continue?

C&C pl0x


Better than what I ever did.
KEEP IT UP ^_^
You'll probably get better as you finish it.
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Jun 23, 2008 3:19 AM #163771
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Better than what I ever did.
KEEP IT UP ^_^
You'll probably get better as you finish it.


Alright. ^_^ I suppose it's not bad for a second animation.
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Jun 23, 2008 3:44 AM #163795
Razr, it's a little slow and uneased. I wouldn't try doing ground shakes until you're better. Also, at the end, the pink guy's leg jerks forward... choppy. Was that on purpose? Hope you improve. =D
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Jun 23, 2008 3:46 AM #163799
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Razr, it's a little slow and uneased. I wouldn't try doing ground shakes until you're better. Also, at the end, the pink guy's leg jerks forward... choppy. Was that on purpose? Hope you improve. =D


I actually find it hard to ease movements such as punches and such.

I get absolutely stuck whenever I try. =/
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Jun 23, 2008 3:52 AM #163805
Same, i get stuck and confused too. But just keep trying xD lol.

anyways....HOW BOUT MY ANIM GUYS???
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Jun 23, 2008 3:53 AM #163808
It's not that it's hard to ease, you just need to know how hard to ease. It just takes practice, if you can ease a walk, you can ease a punch.

Btw, spartan, the walking was surprisingly good. It was pretty choppy, but not that choppy. It was real stiff though =[

I don't think you're ready for beams yet, keep it simple. I see pretty nice potential in you.
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Jun 23, 2008 4:12 AM #163825
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It's not that it's hard to ease, you just need to know how hard to ease. It just takes practice, if you can ease a walk, you can ease a punch.

Btw, spartan, the walking was surprisingly good. It was pretty choppy, but not that choppy. It was real stiff though =[

I don't think you're ready for beams yet, keep it simple. I see pretty nice potential in you.


Yeah, the walk was stiff. I'll drop the beams, and start easing it more. Thanks for the comment ^_^
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Jun 23, 2008 4:55 AM #163853
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Combo test! C&C Please.
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Jun 23, 2008 4:57 AM #163855
Please help me:Nooooooo:
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Jun 23, 2008 5:03 AM #163860
Rofl newfag.
As I said on MSN, add more easing and make the movements in the spin relate to the previous frame.
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Jun 23, 2008 9:38 AM #164024
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Jun 23, 2008 3:46 PM #164185
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Please don't use Myspace codes. Post the animation instead... (-.-')